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My Shore of Dreams

If my mind were a sea, on one of its shores, dreams would drift to me each night, sometimes as beautiful as silken sand. Also I might dream awake. In a contemplative state, I feel the need to take waves of creative thought and form them into phrases and then verses which come together lyrically, constructed carefully with rhyme and rhythm and other poetic devices. These are the sandcastles of my mind. On rare occasions, I discover beautiful and genuine pearls of thought inside my dreamy sand. I fashion them into the best of my poetry. These are my treasures that I keep safest while most of my dear castles get swept away as if by the ocean's tides, not to be viewed by anyone ever again. The times when my sea's tides run dry, then my mind eventually creates tempests which bring onto my sandy shore feelings of despair or disappointment. Rushing to me with bluster, they might rage. More likely, they stir my soul with melancholia. At these times, verses roll forth from my mind free of meter or of rhyme. If my mind were the sea, I would hope for waves of creativity to ever flow onto my shore of dreams.

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Date: 12/16/2023 7:59:00 PM
A lovely view of your 'shore of dreams'...I'm at your page, watching it move... :) Enjoyed!
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Date: 12/12/2023 1:15:00 AM
So beautifully and eloquently written and well expressed. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/12/2023 11:05:00 AM
thanks so much
Date: 12/11/2023 7:31:00 PM
So connecting I just connected to your poetry within few seconds, amazing..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/12/2023 11:05:00 AM
thanks, I am happy for that
Date: 12/11/2023 9:54:00 AM
"I feel the need to take waves of creative thought and form them into phrases and then verses which come together lyrically" -- "These are my treasures that I keep safest while most of my dear castles get swept away" -- "If my mind were the sea, I would hope for waves of creativity" -- "inside my dreamy sand. I fashion them into the best of my poetry." -- Outstanding writing! So lucky to be poets, writing to release our treasures in the face of hoarders.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/12/2023 3:56:00 PM
Thanks. So nice of you to say.
Date: 12/11/2023 6:33:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 12/10/2023 9:24:00 PM
I can so well relate to your feelings ! Often my sandcastles are washed away, leaving nothing behind and I hopefully wait for genuine pearls of thought to be excavated from the sands. Beautiful poem dear Andrea.
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Date: 12/10/2023 6:15:00 PM
Exquisite is the word that comes to my mind. Pearls of creativity=how lovely and divine. I liked tagging along the shoreline with you in this dreamy poem. May you always find your pearls, have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 12/10/2023 3:21:00 PM
This is outstanding poetry Andrea. I'll bet you spent some time on this one
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Date: 12/10/2023 2:39:00 PM
I"m shore you do, I think this is really good.? But I would say that wouldn't i.?? Loll))) thats Because it connects within itself, and also with the Reader seven stars, are in order here ******* All blessings.'
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Date: 12/10/2023 12:15:00 PM
I'm surprised this one didnt finish higher.. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 12/10/2023 11:40:00 AM
I enjoyed your wonderful write. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 12/10/2023 8:51:00 AM
Loved reading this free verse of yours dear Ria. Waves of creativity has always been and will always flow onto your shore of dreams, am sure my friend. Feeling glad to read beautiful verses here in Soup after a long gap... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/10/2023 10:05:00 AM
It's wonderful to see you here, sweet friend
Date: 12/10/2023 8:37:00 AM
You seem to be doing OK already, Andrea. This one is very creative. May the waves always wash upon your shore of dreams. Merry Christmas!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/10/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thanks, Danny. Have a lovely holiday season
Date: 12/10/2023 7:30:00 AM
I hope you always discover those pearls my friend.. a lovely poem and you have expressed your deep thoughts here so well... i hope your shore of dreams remains full of serenity..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/10/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thanks, S.O.
Date: 12/10/2023 5:34:00 AM
Did you notice where I am at right now in poetry number? Your poem is touching, sympathetic and understanding as usual. Have you been back to Idaho lately. jthorn5656@atmc.net
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/10/2023 10:08:00 AM
Haven't been in Idaho lately. Maybe next year to see my nephew in a local theater's play
Date: 12/10/2023 2:36:00 AM
The healing powers of the sea have always been known, and many a poet I'm sure have gained inspiration just being drawn to it. Great poem.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/10/2023 10:07:00 AM
Thanks. I sure do love beaches and warm oceans.
Date: 12/9/2023 10:10:00 PM
The island ish imagery and wordplay in this makes it a favourite for me. Beyond magical and creative. One of your best poems ever, i love the descriptive nature of this and also “ beautiful and genuine pearls of thought inside my dreamy sand. I fashion them into the best of my poetry” beyond impeccable!! I can resonate and i love every word in this especially the captivating opening. How gorgeous is this.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/10/2023 10:04:00 AM
I hope you are right about it. It was fun to write
Date: 12/9/2023 8:32:00 PM
This is a gorgeous poem Andrea. I think my favorite. The sea, the tides, the waves, the flow, the sand and shore... It all feels so dreamy. And the different ways you use sand: the sand castles, the sandy shore, the pearls. It's magnificent! I think this is one of the rare occasions where you discover beautiful and genuine pearls of thought. You must feel it, and know that it is one of your best...
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Date: 12/9/2023 7:28:00 PM
this speaks to the deeper intuition of creativity in all its different hues - nicely said
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