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My Seasons and Their In-Betweens

A time there was that I was caught between my innocence and an awakening! I learned of grown-up things. No longer green, I then had neared the ending of my spring. Brief was the in-between I next would see - that time before life’s summer had begun. I wed at age nineteen. No longer free, I missed what may have been great college fun! How short the time before that summer’s heat would come upon me. I’d spent time abroad for college, and that time was oh, so sweet, but being married left me less than awed! It was a season stifling, long, and hot. Our children came before I finished school. A summer of great comfort it was not, for bad luck and long work hours were not cool! Of this long season I should not complain, for there were moments – some of them my best. The sweet relief of an abundant rain had come before our children left the nest. My in-between phase after summer’s time brought unexpected joy – grand babies too. I started writing, focusing on rhyme, and many were the things I got to do. I think I’m living now my early fall. I’ve faced the Big C and some other woes. I much preferred when health issues were small. How fast the best of in-between time goes! Yes, I’m in autumn, and I have new fears. I must embrace fall’s colors while they’re bright. What comes between the fall and winter years? I wish that thought could bring me more delight! July 9, 2022 for The Time Between The Seasons Poetry Contest of Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 7/31/2022 10:48:00 PM
The melancholy tones of your poem reveal the many challenges you have gone through to present Andrea. I hope your retirement brings you more joy. You give a lot to others which is sure to return to you. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/15/2022 7:10:00 AM
GREAT Repeatedly I have gone through your poem. You are in Autumn. But I have already entered my Winter. Love. All the best
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Date: 7/14/2022 7:11:00 AM
This is a great poem about the loss of innocence. A feeling of melancholy comes through well. Great rhyme and a great, haunted ending.
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Date: 7/12/2022 11:14:00 AM
Well I'm willing to lend some cheer, within your Autumn and winter; I'm in the same Area of Life, so just accept my support and best ' I'm Sure there are so many others here who will Echo this.'
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Date: 7/12/2022 6:46:00 AM
Thanks for Making your, "in between seasons" poem personal, Andrea. It nice to know a little more about Your life through your poetry my friend. A different take on the topic, may do well in the contest. :-) Have a joyful day! Bill
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Date: 7/12/2022 6:41:00 AM
Andrea, this is such a descriptive, expressive, honest poem--skillfully written too. Janice
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Date: 7/10/2022 11:39:00 PM
Love reading your life Andrea is there a part two I want to read more. Blessings...
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Michael Tor
Date: 7/12/2022 1:42:00 AM
lol
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/11/2022 10:22:00 AM
Ha. Part two would take me very close to my winter years. I sure hope not!
Date: 7/10/2022 8:32:00 PM
I believe you have answered so many emotion, in this another of your wonderful poetry. So to the last line of your poem. Well i'm already there Andrea, being here on soup and writing and reading so many of my colleagues works helps ward off the daemons and the pain.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 7/12/2022 11:08:00 AM
God bless you Harry'
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/11/2022 10:22:00 AM
I'm sorry for all your pain, harry. I know it's so hard on you
Date: 7/10/2022 4:58:00 PM
The seasons of your life are well portrayed in these stirring lines, Andrea. I hope you are blessed with a win, Evelyn
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/11/2022 10:22:00 AM
thanks so much
Date: 7/10/2022 2:24:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading a little about your life. Sara
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Date: 7/10/2022 3:58:00 AM
Yes Andrea, I am between my Fall and winter years. I just finished entering this contest too only my poem is more of a love poem. It is so good to be back enjoying Poetry again. This is a wonderful reveal of your life through rhyme. Blessings xxoo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/11/2022 10:23:00 AM
I liked yours better than mine. I think I made mine too personal.
Date: 7/10/2022 2:48:00 AM
WOW. This is a true inspiration and a gracious gift to every reader. I love it. Hope it wins. God bless you, Andrea. Love, Gina
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/11/2022 10:23:00 AM
thanks, you are too kind, Regina.

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