My Sad Childhood

sitting on the park bench
feeding the pigeons
it is times like this
i visit those wishes of mine
as a child
a vegetarian dog was on the list
Santa never came thru
a friend who would gladly
eat mom's vegetables 
from beneath the table
i think i would be 
a much better adult 
if as a child i did not suffer
from brussel sprouts, spinach
the panoply that was in the way
of gravy and mashed potatoes
corn was not all that bad
i guess fruit was mostly good
but life could have been better
such as desserts
i liked those
we could have just skipped dinner
saved my mother all that labor
so as i evaluate it all
mom could have made things easier
my life could have been different
if i had had that dog
childhood tragedies fill my park bench
as i feed the pigeons
ruminating on the life i could have had
with a Rin Tin Tin vegetarian

   OKC   5/22
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Frank Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 10:14 AM
A thoughtful piece of writing and a common thread among many. Well done. We would give ourselves different advice if we went back to our chilhood.
Ray Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 2:55 PM
thanks Mark....quite right
Tor Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 2:35 PM
Timothy a wonderful reflective piece. A special time of reflection on ones youth. Your mom gave great advice " A dollop of humour begins the healing" Enjoyed reading. I will have to read more of your writes. Thanks for stopping by.
Ray Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 2:56 PM
thanks for the comment
Radice Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 3:57 AM
A sad childhood Timothy? Some things in life leave a bitter taste. Some people do too. The what ifs described through the naive mind of a child. I don't profess to understand your poem entirely but I don't think that matters. I liked the read and went back for seconds. Cheers - Gary
Ray Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 6:18 PM
it is simply a fun poem....my childhood was less than perfect but i am long past such thoughts. in my counseling days, i did meet those with a different story and the lightness of this points to the solution, move past or drown in that past. mom said a dollop of humor begins the healing...mom knew
George Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 6:41 AM
A sad childhood leaves painful memories for a life time. You are as gifted as you are now because those early experiences must have made you more mature.
Ray Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 6:28 PM
this was a fun poem, a play on the previous poem "change" and on vegetables. see my reply to Gary above. i suffer no residual pain and to be truthful, inflicted my share. there is a reason the nuns whispered "Enfant Terrible" when i entered. i finished the Harvard Classics long before i left elementary school.
Safari Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 10:19 PM
brilliant!
Ray Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 6:33 PM
thank you, i like doing light verse, it is how i search for words i need to change, see "I am Havoc". searching lines instead of a thesaurus....and the proverbial wise guy crack that made me so many enemies...see above comment
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Hello Timothy, Now I have never heard of a dog eating vegetables. My sister's dog loved meat, and eggs. Dogs love meats and chicken. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Hello Timothy, I agree feed the birds Yes humor begins in the healing. Yes some wounds need healing. Right those that dewell in the past, have no future. I agree. Enjoy your day my friend.
Ray Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 6:37 PM
it is merely a fun poem....yet therein is the message, feed the birds, much better than living in some past complaint...as mom said, humor begins the healing process...but as a former counselor some wounds are very deep and we need help...those who dwell in the past have no future and life is dicovering a life worth living
Rhymer Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Enjoyed this light hearted read from someone who is a lovely adult in all his dealings that have met this fellow time travelers eye.
Ray Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 6:42 PM
and thank you...here is my refuge from the world at large, i am a Homesman (Urban Dictionary) retired from it all and very happy....wrapping it all up for the next phase
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