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My Roses The palest, pastel, roses with pink petals stood Within a pretty porcelain vase of creamy white. He proudly left them there for me, a pure delight... Large and lovely, long-stemmed, leafy, lush...luxurious! Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: 4 Line Contest Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 12/20/2015 1st line - Anagram - (palest, pastel, petals) 2nd and 3rd line - Couplet 4th line - Alliteration

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 2:07:00 AM

Yet another wonderful write n win Sandra.. big congrats!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/21/2015 10:58:00 AM

Oh this is so beautiful! I love it, Sandra! The Alliteration is amazing! Congratulations on a great win and I am delighted to share this placement with you! Pandita

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/21/2015 7:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Very nice.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/20/2015 10:08:00 PM

Back with my congratulations on your win, was a classic!

Joseph May

Date: 12/20/2015 10:03:00 PM

Congrats on your win Sandra...nicely done

John Lawless

Date: 12/20/2015 9:49:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in the contest Sandra. A lovely picture painted in four lines.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2015 7:29:00 PM

gorgeous flowery poem!! Congrats on your win, Sandra.

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2015 8:06:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thanks for visiting and for your supportive comment! Hugs, Sandra

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/20/2015 6:08:00 PM

Aww... So romantc, Sandra! Congrats and Merry X'mas to you and your family!

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2015 8:07:00 PM

Thanks so much, Balveen, for stopping by with your nice comment and congrats! Merry Christmas to you and yours too! Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 4:48:00 PM

sandra, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2015 8:08:00 PM

Hi Linda, thank you so much! I appreciate your visit and nice comment so much. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:29:00 AM

SANDRA, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/20/2015 8:08:00 PM

HI Skat, thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra

Michael Tor

Date: 12/17/2015 10:37:00 AM

Sandra this has great imagery excellent entry for the contest.

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/17/2015 9:12:00 PM

Thanks, Michael. It's fun to work with various forms within one poem! I appreciate your visit and nice comment. Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/17/2015 8:35:00 AM

Sandra, Love the first line, you attract me to do one when I have time, always a lovely soft write and flowing that I like from you.. =`) Have a happy Holidays in advance!hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/17/2015 9:14:00 PM

Hi Olive, thank you so much for your nice, uplifting comments. I wish you and yours a happy holiday too! Hugs, Sandra

John Hamilton

Date: 12/16/2015 11:28:00 PM

Looks like a winner to me Sandra! very nice!

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/17/2015 9:14:00 PM

Thank you for your optimism, John! Thank you again! Sandra