My Rose Was Not Seasonal

My cherished one... Here I am ,alone with stone wall paper in the silence of my room. The pit-pattering raindrops upon my windowsill help me to remember, outside is cold and vacant too. Here I lay , on my dark brown couch like on other nights and many afternoons. Here I stay ,undisturbed ,with a pen in my left hand Provoked to put black ink to paper Seduced to write down unconscious thoughts Terminal thoughts and deepest aches wrapped in the echo of your absence. If only you 'd knew , my rose was not seasonal Its crimson still bleeds ,like in yesterdays , now gone. Its perfume still lingers between forgotten postcards and the impossibility of separation. Its petals once blown , still float across the boundless ocean The same ocean that moves ,that spreads breathlessly between our lands , our lips and hands, but not our hearts Nor the hundred fantasies that still reveal your footprints along my distant winding paths .
Inspired by Adele's latest song - 'Hello '
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mcclain Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Wow, another very good poem--you have a gift for setting a mood and describing a scene in a minimum of well-crafted lines. Very lyrical and rhythmic, especially for free verse. just great..
Makama Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 8:55 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
Hicks Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Wonderful Charmaine ... the rose petals would find themselves continually recycled between the waves in the sea, just as it happens in life, where memories keep resurfacing ... floating back to the top at the most reflective moments. Your extended metaphor makes me ponder.
Salehi Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 1:11 AM
Nicely done..
Diaz Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 1:09 PM
loved it.......
Vaso Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 12:32 PM
I just saw POTD as well! Congrats!
Hynson Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Obviously, the work of a seasoned poet. What's happened to you, happened with me, and your words resonate deeply.
Devnath  Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 6:09 PM
An excellent heartfelt expression that's inscribed literary through geometrical version of two touching hearts but not intersect one another. A great poem my lovely friend. Clean 7 i think. My favorite poetess and poem too. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 6:37 PM
you were very well inspired by "hello" it's a beautiful song, as is your poem, Charma
Osho Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 9:12 AM
brilliant
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 8:13 AM
I see that this has been featured as POTD, well done. Wonderfully penned.
Ryerson Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 5:50 AM
To Charming Charma: Well, you have charmed me again...'Terminal thoughts and deepest aches wrapped in the echo of your absence'...Yes indeed! No one says it better than you dear lady. Merry Christmas from your friend and fan - Tim
Onclaud Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 2:48 AM
you wove a beautiful, languid scene, charms!.. congrats on your POTD..huggs
Mothiba Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:56 AM
WOW WHAT A GREAT POEM ,,I ENJOYED READING IT
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 10:13 PM
congrats on POTD well deserved. JDH
Chircop Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Thanks to all my dear friends,and my thanks to you as well , tps..: ) : ) .
Manassian Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Signature you.....Beautiful One. I loved the title...and there the enchantment started for this write. You kept it till the end. Superb.
Yvonne Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 12:47 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!
Chircop Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Long time no seen...Glad you are back..Read your poetry soon.
Yvonne Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 12:02 PM
This is about love, this is about passion. It is about lost it is about hope. This is about inspiration it is about writing about being a poet. This is about being chosen. Thank you for this oh so very special piece. A fav!
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 8:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 8:00 AM
congrats on POTD Charma:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I love your unique style.
Vaso Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 2:13 AM
Wow Wow, amazing, I really love this this poem, the flow and romance within! A7
Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 4:08 PM
- Beautiful - Best wishes for a lovely weekend, Charmaine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Meade Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 1:16 PM
the pain of an undying love . . . you are the master of plumbing the these depths of longing love. loved it.
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