Premiere Contest WinnerMy Roots Are Deep

* I am slipping into a dream, I am in a forest of trees so beautiful and I see myself a tree, my roots deep in the earth my branches raised to the sun. I am strength and I am courage. A river flows past me like a stream of glass. I am tranquility and serenity. The winds are whistling through my weeping leaves like a violin crying and echoing in the forest. I gave to life all the soul I had in me, all the tears, trembling, throbbing- and all the pain fell as Autumn leaves. My pain drifted away in red, and orange decay I rested under the sun and placed on a cloak of pure white beauty, then in the Spring I put on an emerald gown so pretty and lovely. __________________________ January 25, 2017 Poetry/Shape/My Roots Are Deep Copyright Protected, ID 01-868-807-25 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest ,Show Me Your Shape Contest sponsor, Anthony Slausen, Judged 2017 Third Place __________________________ Submitted to the Standard Contest, But Seriously Contest sponsor, John Lawless, Judged First Place __________________________ Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1053) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/17/2022 First Place
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Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 7:18 PM
So beautiful, Constance, and shape is perfect!
La France Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 6:43 AM
Kim, thank you for the visit and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
White Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 2:19 AM
Wonderful, I absolutely love this one... Congratulations :)
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 3:28 PM
many congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
Neumann Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 5:33 AM
Great. Congratulations, Kai
Carmack Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 1:27 AM
Constance - congrats on both your wins with this poem.
Leiser Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Very beautiful imagery and shape in your excellent poem, Constance! Congrats on your win :)
Inman Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 9:30 PM
A lovely write BW.
Krampe Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 4:16 PM
Awesome! Congrats on your win, Constance.
Roper Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Awesome shape, heartfelt poem :( congratulations on your win ~* Hugs
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February 8, 2017 at 10:56 PM
Fantastic job with the concrete form; a challenging one. Enjoy the smooth flow of lines composed. Congrats on your trophy win BW. :) Sunita
Lawless Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 9:32 PM
So Constance, this is a magnificent Concrete(shape) poem. It flows very smoothly (not easy to achieve in a concrete poem) and the line breaks work nicely ( again, not easy to do in this form). So congrats...and thanks for entering this in the contest
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 12:06 PM
Constance, congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy first place win. Such a beautiful concrete poem, and as an artist I really appreciate the beautiful image you created with your words and design. Hugs, Sandra
Garcia Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:45 AM
This might be the most bad ass thing I've ever seen. Congrats on your placement. Beyond well deserved. It's a phenomenal poem without being concrete- breathtaking really, made all the more impressive by the shape. Great great great
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 8:56 PM
SO beautiful, Constance!!! And you really got the shape of the tree looking perfect!
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