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My Retreat

Bucolic scene in pleasant glade, cool stream, tall trees I've come to see. Delightful sounds, soul's serenade, elating scene makes tiredness flee, renews my joy and sets me free. Date: September 29, 2019 Contest Title: Brevity Poetry Contest, No More Than Six Lines Placed 1st Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger May 18, 2021 entered in the Charm Me Contest Placed 3rd Sponsor: Line Gauthier December 7, 2021 entered in the Bite Size Poem no. 29 Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/27/2021 10:21:00 AM
A beautiful scene of such serenity does much for refreshing and rejuvenating us. Beautifully and serenely pictured. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/23/2021 9:30:00 PM
Vibrant liberating joyfulness! Congrats on your win, with these enchanting lines, Janice!
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Date: 5/23/2021 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations, Janice, in Line Gauthier's "Charm me," contest. Great imagery, feel, and flow in your, "My Retreat" poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/3/2019 5:03:00 PM
Janice congratulations on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/3/2019 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. Janice
Date: 10/3/2019 3:51:00 PM
'Janice, Congratulations on your trophy win. Nice,peaceful write. David'
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/3/2019 7:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, David. Janice
Date: 10/3/2019 12:14:00 PM
Janice great win congrats !;)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/3/2019 12:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Brenda. Janice
Date: 9/30/2019 1:30:00 AM
Hello Janice … our own personal retreat is a haven of peace and a chance to reflect. Nicely written Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/3/2019 12:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 9/29/2019 3:56:00 PM
you did this very well..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/29/2019 7:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, S. O. Janice
Date: 9/29/2019 3:55:00 PM
This is perfect and relaxing! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/29/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi. Janice

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