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My Reason For Living

My world gets up at five every day Gets home at five too Works too many hours so I don't have too. My light in this life cares too deeply My light, is burning at both ends most days Joy of living, song of my heart Over flow my soul with the joy of your smile Caress my senses with your presence One look and I melt...to you. For Matt Calari's Contest I love you...

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Swairik Das

Date: 1/25/2010 2:58:00 AM

good one. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2010 12:16:00 PM

Just had to come back here and say how much I like this!! andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2010 7:02:00 AM

Winner's circle for sure. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom

Billy Thekidster

Date: 1/22/2010 3:32:00 PM

Doris, an excellent Reason for Living. It sounds like your lite in this life is truly giving. Another great write Doris. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Mike Butler

Date: 1/22/2010 3:13:00 PM

I love the metaphor in the first line. Great poem! Good luck in the contest. -Mike

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/22/2010 1:19:00 PM

Lovely Doris just lovely Thanks Daniel

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2010 9:36:00 AM

wow, you did an amazing job with this one. This goes right to my favs. (he sounds kind of like my hubbie the way he gets up so early and works so hard) LUv, andrea

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/22/2010 7:34:00 AM

a very nice dedication to the man of your life. i loved the way it was expressed. if i was yo man. I'd....... John H Loving III

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/22/2010 4:48:00 AM

Great verses, Doris! Wish you good luck for the contest and thank you for your kind comments...Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 1/21/2010 11:22:00 PM

Thank for for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/21/2010 9:34:00 PM

Awesome! Doris! A winner in my book. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/21/2010 7:19:00 PM

Great entry Doris.. some challenge not being able to use the word LOVE.. I also entered Cozy Confections... it was not too difficult .. had to stop trying to write love down every time I wrote another line... enjoyed .. and good luck... luv.. with blessings.. Linda-Marie..

Marty Owens

Date: 1/21/2010 6:16:00 PM

Very nice poem Doris...I can tell this guy is really special to you...Good luck in the contest...Marty

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/21/2010 5:43:00 PM

Wow, Doris...What a wonderful statement of love from you to your hard-working soul-mate...Very inspiring! And don't sell yourself short...he's a lucky guy too! - Tim