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My Pregnant Wife

In front of her body is a baggage counting through the months she pray the child kicks in its watery garage creating its own bond and wanting to play mama loves him, though to her, he is blind fertility prepares in ablution more great seeds in the hope of a rewind like blessing this full present ignition mall after mall for any baby bay to shop for the new entry with all dime preparing the road to open the way anything less is a maternal crime stress pricks the body like a little blade this great hope ensures it will not fade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/9/2016 10:59:00 PM
Dear FM, Presentation is outstanding. Loved each line. Metaphors are also used brilliantly. A7 from me............//:) with love//Manmath.
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Date: 8/17/2016 4:52:00 PM
A 7 for this sonnet of joy and anticipation, Funom! Janice
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Date: 8/13/2016 3:39:00 PM
You are both blessed, Funom! There is nothing sweeter nor more fulfilling than this "baggage". They grow up too quickly, so enjoy!:) best wishes to you all! Mikki
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Date: 8/7/2016 10:00:00 AM
Very moving, and caring as well. I await to read more. Signed Tera
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Date: 8/6/2016 12:05:00 PM
- Exciting times are ahead ..... remember to massage your wife's feet tonight :) - A lovely poem, Funom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 12:16:00 PM
Thanks for the beautiful comment. I will ensure I do that.

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