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My Precious Teddy Bear

Come with me my little Teddy, Be with me till night and day, Sit beside me and be happy, Coz I’m here for you to stay. Teddy bear, my teddy bear, Every time you are near, Happiness inside my heart, You and I will never be apart. Many years has just passed, My teddy never takes a bath, Coz I’m afraid the colors will fade, And I don’t want either to trade. The smell is really disgusting, I still hug it when I am sleeping, If my mother try to wash my Teddy Bear, The sound of my loudest wail filled in the air. My Teddy Bear may look topless and old, It’s my priceless gift more than a pure gold, We love each other till the end of time, My sweet little Teddy, you are all mine. January 4, 2013 Maria Paz Samelo For Sandy's "Teddy Bear Picnic" Contest 3rd Place Winner

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Date: 2/3/2013 6:26:00 PM
big congrats, this was a very well deserved win!
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Date: 1/30/2013 11:36:00 AM
Wonderful poem and love the shape of it !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 1/30/2013 8:56:00 AM
My biggest congratulations on your third place win my dearest friend, Maria! Cheers! love always, Leonora
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Date: 1/29/2013 11:33:00 AM
First love of a wee one can't be denied. You express this beautifully in this wonderful entry. Congratulations on your win Maria!
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Date: 1/29/2013 8:52:00 AM
A true testament to the love of a Teddy. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/29/2013 6:59:00 AM
Precious indeed, congrats.
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Date: 1/29/2013 5:31:00 AM
congrats on yor win Maria...
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Date: 1/28/2013 11:44:00 PM
Awww try a dry powder cleanser on poor smelly Ted....Seren
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Date: 1/28/2013 10:02:00 PM
congratulations on your excellent win....
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Date: 1/28/2013 9:34:00 PM
Hi Maria, Congratulations :-) on a cuddly interesting childhood thought and poem. Enjoyed your "Teddy Bear Picnic" winning poem in SandI's contest, ~Always* PD
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Date: 1/28/2013 9:20:00 PM
thank you' SandyIvy
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Date: 1/9/2013 4:14:00 AM
wonderful write Maria,best wishes for the contest
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Date: 1/8/2013 6:56:00 PM
So nice to read your work this evening. Light & Love
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Date: 1/8/2013 8:25:00 AM
Well-structured poem. Good luck.
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Date: 1/7/2013 10:07:00 AM
For a sweet poem, I am sure teddy bear is just adorable. - Good luck with your poem in the contest Maria. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/7/2013 9:13:00 PM
Thanks friend Anne Lise..Happy New Year!!
Date: 1/5/2013 8:50:00 PM
a very good entry... love what you did... a sure winner... you know what i like about this poem... it is totally the opposite of my teddy bear poem... adding this beyond awesome Teddy Bear poem to my faves... hope you do not mind...love...pd
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:09:00 AM
million thanks dear PD for your nice comments.. (^_^) a blessed day always!! hugs
Date: 1/5/2013 4:31:00 PM
So cute, Maria! Love it, girl :) Good luck!
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:11:00 AM
thanks friend Toquyen :) a blessed day always!
Date: 1/5/2013 11:15:00 AM
whatr a sweet write, my friend - congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:12:00 AM
thanks friend Jack :) a blessed day always
Date: 1/5/2013 9:43:00 AM
This is sweet Maria, having beloved Teddy which always together with you :D good luck for the contest and wishing you all the best - hug, yanny
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:14:00 AM
thanks friend Yanny :) a blessed day always
Date: 1/5/2013 7:52:00 AM
I never had a teddy bear I really feel I missed out somewhere. love this Maria xx
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:16:00 AM
thanks dear friend Mandy :) a blessed day always
Date: 1/4/2013 8:23:00 PM
this is sweet and it reminds me how old looking my pinky winky got after his never having a bath in so many years!!
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:17:00 AM
thanks friend Andrea :) a blessed day always
Date: 1/4/2013 4:21:00 PM
nice write Maria...I like the last stanza
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:18:00 AM
Thanks friend Joseph..good day!
Date: 1/4/2013 7:46:00 AM
Ahh love objects! perhaps I need a new teddy bear? Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:21:00 AM
thanks friend Debbie :) a blessed day always
Date: 1/4/2013 7:41:00 AM
Wow! Super love it! This is so beautiful write my dear Mary! A winner for me! Good luck in the contest! love always, Leonora
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Date: 1/6/2013 8:25:00 AM
thanks my dear friend Norie :) ood luck to us this year :) mwuah!!

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