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August.17.2023
Tableau Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Joseph May
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In my sweet delta, My pleasure palace, With doors opening, Into my garden, Where bright blooms blossom, I sit weaving dreams.

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Date: 8/29/2023 10:45:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, what serene sweetness of daydreams in a beautiful garden your poem portrays. Your words are like the fragrance that comes from the blooms here! There is such gentleness and an invitation to dream. I almost wrote on this prompt but I could not have done it the justice that you did, my friend! Congratulations on your win, sweet poet! Blessings to you!
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Date: 8/21/2023 3:15:00 AM
- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs
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Date: 8/20/2023 6:05:00 PM
I love that last line, Valsa! A lovely write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/20/2023 8:19:00 AM
LOvely write Valsa, Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/19/2023 4:06:00 AM
Amazing words and I love this because it is me, too. God bless you and your garden. love, Gina
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Date: 8/17/2023 8:56:00 PM
How delightful. Sounds like the perfect place for a splendid daydream. Lovely poem Valsa.
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Date: 8/17/2023 8:41:00 PM
'I sit weaving dreams' - so perfectly put, hope you have a special spot for weaving all your dreams~
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Date: 8/17/2023 6:31:00 PM
You have managed to create an enchanting and intricately designed ambiance, Valsa.
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Date: 8/17/2023 4:59:00 PM
Sweet poetry to my ears, Valsa. You make it dreamy, my friend. Have a blissful day! Bill
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Date: 8/17/2023 11:31:00 AM
- A beautiful place for dreams, Valsa - Love it :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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Date: 8/17/2023 10:36:00 AM
You picked up a nice garden and dreams.
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