My Pillow

I love my pillow Fits my neck just right And I always win In a pillow fight!
Twenty Syllables Barbara Gorelick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 10:13 PM
Congrats on your win! Blessings, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Like the surprise ending..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
K. Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 11:11 AM
Very cute, write Barbara :) congrats!
Taylor Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 8:37 AM
Congrats, Barb. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Best to you and yours. luv and hugs, Ralph
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March 2, 2012 at 8:08 PM
BARBARA... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Ronthorpe Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 4:41 PM
Barbara, well done. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe
Onclaud Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 10:10 AM
impressed! super cheers to you for the great win, barbara!..:) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 9:56 AM
congrats BG on another excellent win for this poetic art piece\ luv..
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 8:04 AM
adorable! congrats on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations, like it well done xx
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
Eastman Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Fun read. LOL
Horne Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 12:49 PM
LOL, I had a good chuckle at this one, Barbara. My friend had moved into a furnished flat and the ghost presumably disliked a picture of a blue-faced Madonna and child (which Jo said she hated too, but it belonged to the landlady!)
Babcock Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 9:53 AM
Nothing better at night than your own pillow. Gee, haven't had a pillow fight in years should give my hubby a whack ha ha. love phyl
Debole Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Two good reasons to love your pillow. I'm happy with mine, too. Fun poem!
Susan Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 4:17 PM
ha! very clever :P wish i could think of something so clever - you make it look easy! Fav poem :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 3:26 PM
Very cute! I love my pillow, too. Best wishes in the contest. Rhonda :)
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 2:52 PM
I love my pillow to :) Nicely done, Barbara.- oxox love Anne-Lise
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