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My Pillow

I love my pillow Fits my neck just right And I always win In a pillow fight! Twenty Syllables Barbara Gorelick

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/4/2012 10:13:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2012 1:44:00 PM

Like the surprise ending..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/3/2012 11:11:00 AM

Very cute, write Barbara :) congrats!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/3/2012 8:37:00 AM

Congrats, Barb. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Best to you and yours. luv and hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 8:08:00 PM

BARBARA... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 3/2/2012 4:41:00 PM

Barbara, well done. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2012 10:10:00 AM

impressed! super cheers to you for the great win, barbara!..:) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2012 9:56:00 AM

congrats BG on another excellent win for this poetic art piece\ luv..

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/2/2012 8:04:00 AM

adorable! congrats on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/2/2012 6:08:00 AM

Congratulations, like it well done xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Carol Eastman

Date: 2/29/2012 7:54:00 AM

Fun read. LOL

Jack Horne

Date: 2/27/2012 12:49:00 PM

LOL, I had a good chuckle at this one, Barbara. My friend had moved into a furnished flat and the ghost presumably disliked a picture of a blue-faced Madonna and child (which Jo said she hated too, but it belonged to the landlady!)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/26/2012 9:53:00 AM

Nothing better at night than your own pillow. Gee, haven't had a pillow fight in years should give my hubby a whack ha ha. love phyl

Gail Debole

Date: 2/25/2012 5:38:00 PM

Two good reasons to love your pillow. I'm happy with mine, too. Fun poem!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/25/2012 4:17:00 PM

ha! very clever :P wish i could think of something so clever - you make it look easy! Fav poem :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/25/2012 3:26:00 PM

Very cute! I love my pillow, too. Best wishes in the contest. Rhonda :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2012 2:52:00 PM

I love my pillow to :) Nicely done, Barbara.- oxox love Anne-Lise