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My "pen"(Round Thirteen For Sarah)

When motivated, I extend my pen To reveal if I can endure the test. It retracts, when it needs to take a rest, After I am done expressing my sin. My pen is able to make women grin, And helps me get the stress off of my chest. Desired by my most critical guest, It is the envy of average men. In the beginning, my pen did not lack, And continued to get better with age. So, my pen has always been welcomed back, Because my pen has become all the rage. Although my ink is not, my pen is black, With a unique way for filling a page.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/8/2010 4:16:00 PM
The metaphoric language in this one is interesting for one could go several different ways with it...Keep the creative wordprocessor going..Sara
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Date: 7/8/2010 3:39:00 PM
U guys are keeping me so entertained by your slams to each other.. Dakari I so appreciate your kind words and comments on my poetry... hope u will enter some of the contests posted with your wonderful writes.. even slams do well in contests.. good luck if u enter any of them.. with luv .."Sweetheart"
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Date: 7/8/2010 1:33:00 PM
Nice one dakarai,, a unique write this is ,, enjoyed....P.D.
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Date: 7/7/2010 4:26:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dakarai. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 11:47:00 PM
Very good Dakarai I have to get on with my next one today x sarah
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:12:00 PM
I love men whose pens "make women grin." This is wonderfully witty, Dakarai! Love, Carolyn
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