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My Parting Gifts

For Witness Protection, I'm bound. I have some advice. Gather round. First tip: When you see a crime, you must flee. Call cops. After that make no sound! Next: Grandkids, your rooms are a sight, piled ceiling to floor--What a fright! Now for safety's sake, when I'm gone please take a week or so to put them right! Last, as I am pulled through the door, I'll hurry. I want to say more: Show love. Be peacemakers. Be real; don't be fakers. Love life and its blessings galore. February 13, 2016 for Viv Wigley's My Parting Gifts contest (advice for loved ones, whom you'll never see again . . . )

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Date: 9/10/2016 5:22:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/10/2016 8:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara! Janice
Date: 9/2/2016 12:04:00 PM
Great advice...esp to grandchildren...:D Congrats! Sunita
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/10/2016 8:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunita! Janice
Date: 2/14/2016 1:09:00 PM
i enjoyed this witty poem. thanks and good luck in the contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/14/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thanks, Susan. Janice
Date: 2/14/2016 12:12:00 PM
Cleverly done - loved the mood and tone ... CayCay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/14/2016 2:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, CayCay. Janice
Date: 2/13/2016 12:57:00 PM
lovely string of limericks Janice good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/13/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, for the encouraging words. The prompt calls for three verses. Janice

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