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My Own Omnipotent Fiction

Frankly, before clocks people seemed to get on just fine—sun enough, for even on cloudy days and starless nights they sensed a seamless rotation: So unlike our endless divisions of mechanics; math in place of devil and God-- with abrupt start and soulless termination. I fall somewhere between-- when confronted by the choices far more inclined to choose my own omnipotent fiction….

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Date: 5/23/2018 12:45:00 PM
In those final three lines, I think that you may have come close to expressing one of the fundamental truths of existence. Stay with your inclination. Best wishes.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/23/2018 1:40:00 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey; have a great day my friend!
Date: 4/13/2018 1:41:00 AM
Very deep poem, Joe Much to ponder here. Elaine
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/13/2018 4:32:00 AM
Hi Elaine; thank you for stopping by my friend. Have a beautiful day!

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