My Own

FREE EPIC VERSE what a poor and meager place, set aside for old age and retirement. what a struggle with little mouths to feed! did ever a person wish to help, for that was the time for milk and things for growing minds. struggled on with no such aid, never with the naked eye did once looked upon that place much narrower indeed! knowing that they had their own green and fertile too. what a bounteous space to claim! what a thing it would be to need that struggled-for narrow space I cared not to behold. never to give either thought or kind.

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Rainbow Promise

Date: 4/2/2016 4:38:00 PM

The future is like a "far-off" dream. You try to "make-up" your mind many times about it. Bearing in mind the scriptural thought by Solomon "enjoy the fruits of your hard labor," one often waits on gratuity and other investments to realize what was being "turned over and over" in one's mind - I think its this, I think its that; until a major change is made at close to that "TIME"! Other's advice may not be what you want, they are problem-solving from the "core of themselves" not from yours.

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Rainbow Promise
Date: 4/3/2016 2:27:00 AM

If Everyone does what Everybody else does in the dame MANNER, how does the Community and Society at large benefit? e.g. If I hang clothes for sale, or hire Models for a Fashion Show I sponsor for a FEE at the door - I benefit, the paid Models benefit, wholesale marketing benefits; not to forget that taxes paid would be increased for the State.