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MY OLD NEIGHBORHOOD ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
crackerbox houses a house a plumber could afford, barely. I recall the pecan tree, remembering how I spent many afternoons writing stories and poems under its branches. the street was once charged with life~ kids walking to and from school, playing kick-the-can, hide ‘n seek, hopscotch, and red rover. streetlights told us it was time to go home. but the years brought change what was once full of life is now silent. Everyone has moved on. But in my mind’s eye, I can still see the cracks in the sidewalk, the rustling of the pecan tree, the setting sun while drinking iced tea on the front porch, and smelling dinner cooking as it wafted through the open windows. *Note: This poem was originally published at Poetry Soup, June 2025, and Lucky Jefferson Literary Magazine, July 2025.

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Date: 7/23/2025 4:00:00 PM
Congratulation for being published in Jefferson Literary Magazine, Sara! Memories can be so strong they still seem real. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/23/2025 5:53:00 PM
thank you for your congratulatory words, Bill. I agree...memories do seem real. hugs, me
Date: 7/23/2025 10:38:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Sara. It seems like 60 years later, the two houses I remember best are the one I grew up in, and my grandparents.
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Date: 7/23/2025 5:52:00 PM
thanks for your visit, David. I, too, remember best my childhood home and my grandfather's home is Missouri. enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 7/23/2025 7:42:00 AM
In this poem, I see your nice mind’s eye, delightful read that showed your fidelity!
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/23/2025 5:51:00 PM
awww, what a sweet thing to say....I appreciate your words more than I can say. enjoy your evening, Sara

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