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MY OLD NEIGHBORHOOD

MY OLD NEIGHBORHOOD ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
crackerbox houses a house a plumber could afford, barely. I recall the pecan tree, remembering how I spent many afternoons writing stories and poems under its branches. the street was once charged with life~ kids walking to and from school, playing kick-the-can, hide ‘n seek, hopscotch, and red rover. streetlights told us it was time to go home. but the years brought change what was once full of life is now silent. Everyone has moved on. But in my mind’s eye, I can still see the cracks in the sidewalk, the rustling of the pecan tree, the setting sun while drinking iced tea on the front porch, and smelling dinner cooking as it wafted through the open windows. *Note: This poem was originally published at Poetry Soup, June 2025, and Lucky Jefferson Literary Magazine, July 2025.
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Baker Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Congratulation for being published in Jefferson Literary Magazine, Sara! Memories can be so strong they still seem real. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 5:53 PM
thank you for your congratulatory words, Bill. I agree...memories do seem real. hugs, me
Crandall Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Wonderful poem, Sara. It seems like 60 years later, the two houses I remember best are the one I grew up in, and my grandparents.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 5:52 PM
thanks for your visit, David. I, too, remember best my childhood home and my grandfather's home is Missouri. enjoy your evening, Sara
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 7:42 AM
In this poem, I see your nice mind’s eye, delightful read that showed your fidelity!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 5:51 PM
awww, what a sweet thing to say....I appreciate your words more than I can say. enjoy your evening, Sara
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