My Old Home

The dust has all but settled
let me go get the broom
sweeping off the back porch
and that old sitting room

Last night's wind storm was mighty
it nearly blew me far away
the foundation was a crumbling
as the house just swung and swayed

The timbers they were creaking
the tin roof has sprung a leak
the shutters all are broken
for a moment it really looked bleak

But that old building has survived
worn and weathered but tough
it stood up tall and fought
when everything got rough

There's so much beauty left
in this old home of mine
I believe I shall be loving her
till the very end of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/29/2017 10:58:00 AM
I love poems that are easy to understand and your poem is beautiful. Will you also read my poetry?
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Date: 3/25/2017 4:09:00 AM
Morning Tim. How very true. There are some things in life and yes places that we can never let go of. A home is one of those those things. Your words and entry are beautiful. We all can relate. You wrote smoothly and with love. May all old buildings survive. Well done
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Date: 3/19/2017 4:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem Tim. :) So very sentimental <3
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Date: 3/19/2017 4:31:00 AM
...how beautiful Tim :-) heartfelt sentiments that touch one's very soul. Wonderful writing :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/18/2017 5:41:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Tim! Great work! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/18/2017 5:21:00 AM
That is great, a tough structure ready to survive the storm, awesome personification. A home, a self, made of strong sticks and stones. Hugs x
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Date: 3/17/2017 7:16:00 PM
aw, this is so good, Tim! No matter how worn our home becomes, it is home... comfy cozy and familiar.
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Date: 3/17/2017 7:08:00 PM
Very well written, and how so very appropriate for me!
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Date: 3/17/2017 7:00:00 PM
Oh, Tim, you will touch us all with this. My childhood "homes" were adobe with thick, thick, walls, and mother had to dust every, every day. My home of many, many years now is like my second skin. And I cling to it.
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