Get Your Premium Membership

My New Home

Threadbare, uninviting, almost claustrophobic, And cold. I could not afford heat. I put on the lights and felt an icy solitude. No home sweet home for me. Would I get attuned to my new apartment? Lonely, I ate my packed tasteless food quickly, changed into a cosy track suit, switched off the lights and went to bed hoping for pleasant elusive dreams. Suddenly melodic tunes infiltrated my slumber. I wake. Upstairs someone must love old time songs. Like a somnambulant I climb the stairs and knock. She was like a mirage, shimmering in the haze of a desert. Silently she beckoned me inside the warm room. My name is Angel, she whispered. And the dance began, Until tired, the haze of the desert enveloped me too. Much later I woke. I was in my bed. Was it a dream? Probably. The landlord said the upper flat was empty still, But to be occupied that day, Someone called Angel. That night I did not sleep, but waited for the music to start.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/22/2022 2:05:00 AM
You have strange ideas and wild imagination in your head and you turn them into beautiful poems. Really enjoyed this !
Login to Reply
Date: 1/30/2021 8:24:00 AM
A great dream, Victor :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/30/2021 8:06:00 AM
A dream, a vision, a fantasy, a reality. It's all the same with warmth and music in the air! Lovely write Victor! :) Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 1/30/2021 6:44:00 AM
A Lovely write Victor, Angel in particular takes center stage, the music is angelic for you. Great write, well penned. Hugs and blessings Victor. Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/29/2021 10:01:00 AM
Great one to warm up with. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2021 10:33:00 AM
Victor, I prefer this succinct version which leave out unnecessary details. Also the way you end it, just better for me!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2021 8:15:00 AM
Creative work with a twist to the end. I liked reading this one. I am glad that I chose it as one of the ones I could read today. Your visits to my page give me a lift. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2021 8:13:00 AM
I love your whimsy! It is good to have warm thoughts when real life feels emoty and claustrophobic. God bless you, dearest friend! ...Kim
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2021 6:38:00 AM
Nice story Victor ..dream and music. Enjoyed reading. God bless. ~ Ani
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 8:28:00 PM
Your amazing poem reminds me of the song, Dream Weaver, by Gary Wright, Victor. This verse is enchanting!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 11:26:00 AM
WoW! This is perfect for the beginning to a short story. The imagery is super and the description perfect. Sort of like a visit to The Twilight Zone. Love it. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 11:15:00 AM
Oh how chilling to the body, but thrilling to the soul. What a wonderful dream, only to realize it was something much more... much more.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 11:03:00 AM
Only the blessed get such a visit. Superbly creative write, Victor. Dream or not, let fantasies shine. Once again, a story from your gifted pen.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 9:18:00 AM
Angle is in the house, dreams do come true :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 9:05:00 AM
I wish you joy in your new home Victor, may the music never end ~~ Belle
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 6:40:00 AM
Wow! That sounds magical, Victor, wonderful write:)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 4:43:00 AM
WoW! Victor, What a lovely dream? It seems like your dream is about to be a reality. I enjoyed this well written from start to finish. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 3:28:00 AM
- Who wants to sleep when one waits for this dance ... a lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2021 2:17:00 AM
Your dream is about to come true Victor. Enjoy the music. Tom
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things