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My Name Is Rose

I know that I am dying, I am fading fast,
     my life is almost over, by tomorrow I will be dead;
and I find myself on a grave stone draped in quietus,
        come the next dawn- I will be withered gone.

A girl brought me to this vast place of deep tears,
     her sad weeping wet my soft red velvet petals;
she had plucked me from my shade in her little garden,
          oh, I was so happy there growing by the fence.

I heard her say the word baby in her sadness,
     then she placed me gently on this cold tomb to die;
will I bring the baby peace- will the baby know me,
          soon we are alone, baby and me- hello I whisper.

My name is Rose, soon I will join you in the other world,
     that night I watched the moon and stars above;
for the last time I knew the dawn and then I gasped,
           all was still -  I was in the hand of a child.

The child pressed me to his lips and kissed me beautiful,
     my petals were no longer brittle cold but lovely;
and here we lay under the blue azure sky and cool earth,
         a rose and a baby boy, joined in death by eternal love.

For years we listen to birds singing and wind sighing,
     the rain gently falling and snowflakes drifting in winter;
birds in circled flight above and distant whispers of love,
          and the tears of an old woman falling on our tomb. 
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August 23, 2016


Poetry/Personification/My Name is Rose
Copyright Protected, ID 16-1215-360-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to the contest, Strand Select 8
sponsor, Brian Strand

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Chiri Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Dear heart I loved this! Congratulations my friend!;)
La France Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:57 AM
Brenda, thanks for the love and the congratulations !
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 3:18 AM
A Rose withers.. its scent fades away.. its beauty wanes.. a rose departs this life.. Still, it remains vivid.. pure.. alive ever in the core of Beauty.. romance.. Life and death! A Rose is a wordless world of wonder! a silent Love! a sweet smile! a blissful healing! a wholehearted gratitude! a bow to a serene last breath! A stunning work from the heart of a charming Rose to my very heart! A great pleasure to read your poetry, dear Dear Heart! Regards and blessings to you.
La France Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Besma, thanks for visiting my poetry and for the beautiful poetic comment !
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