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My Mother's Eyes

i have my mother's eyes they're on my darker side when a lover says you're just like your mother i can hear them roll ***

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/19/2019 10:12:00 PM

WOW! Hugs.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/20/2019 7:54:00 AM

Giggles & Hugs! <3

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/18/2019 5:41:00 PM

So funny!!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/18/2019 10:04:00 PM

Hugs & Giggles ;) xomo!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/18/2019 9:43:00 AM

Enjoyed this so much, Maureen! I have my mother's eye coloring, but not her expression! LOL

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/18/2019 9:49:00 AM

Thank you! I don't have her eye coloring, my mother's eyes' a song that's always made me think of her. Despite what my luv(s) may think(thunk), my tongue will never be as sharp as hers ;) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 2/17/2019 4:03:00 PM

Hahaha... Brilliant! You do make me smile..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/17/2019 6:04:00 PM

Tee hee ;) Thank you! xomo

W.A. Cholt

Date: 2/17/2019 1:15:00 PM

Nice short poem. A powerful picture.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/17/2019 3:32:00 PM

Thank you :) xomo

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/17/2019 11:18:00 AM

Nice one. I have my late mother's hair ... and her wicked rebellion.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/17/2019 11:47:00 AM

My mother has passed too. I don't actually have her eyes, a bit of her mouth tho ;) mo hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/17/2019 6:01:00 AM

Emergency...Fire in the house...All the best Maureen

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/17/2019 6:48:00 AM

All's well, just some water damage ;) xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/17/2019 12:13:00 AM

"I can hear them roll" was so much smarter than anything else you could have said. Smirking now.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/17/2019 6:46:00 AM

Hee hee, thank you, sorta started there, when I thought of changing it muse said absolutely no ;)

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 2/16/2019 11:09:00 PM

As always, minimum wordage, maximum effect. Nice one, Mo.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/16/2019 11:13:00 PM

Aw, thank you so much Lawrence! xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/16/2019 11:06:00 PM

I rate this poem 'U.' For u-rise, of course. Wink, wink... (Don't worry now. I'm headed back to my man-cave to brood further...) ~ gw

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/16/2019 11:10:00 PM

Lol! I'm off to curl up to my stinky furnace ;) nighty night! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/16/2019 10:13:00 PM

So droll, Maureen, I'm sure your mother's proud!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/16/2019 10:23:00 PM

Thank you Michelle, she might be ;) xomo! <3