My Mother

Born across the sea
Freedom through Ellis Island
Worked her life long
Gave her children her own dream
Worn, lined, beautiful face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/30/2009 3:37:00 PM
A classic write Barbara, Ellis Island the modern gateway to the land of the free>>James
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Date: 1/11/2009 1:30:00 PM
HG has a thing for you . and this is a thoughtful piece and dedication. john
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Date: 1/9/2009 3:30:00 PM
My Barbeeg, Beeg, A beautiful picture of YOUR Mother's face A swet history of her life I know now why YOU have such a big Heart I just realized there is a 4 hour difference in time between us Your probably not Home from work yet. Talk to YOU later Barbeeg Xliamp ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 1/7/2009 9:32:00 AM
Worn, lined beautiful face..excellent line..love the first line..reveals some but not a whole lot...fourth line is very strong..giving away your dreams for others speaks of the selflessness that one possess in their heart...loved this piece..Much love, Chris.
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Date: 1/7/2009 6:17:00 AM
Such a lovely dedication. Beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/7/2009 5:24:00 AM
What an awesome dedication! Love, Kristin
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Date: 1/6/2009 8:47:00 PM
This is a beautiful tribute to your Mother. So much is said in just a few lines. Wonderful write! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/6/2009 8:02:00 PM
you did a wonderful job writing about your mother... and thanks for your comment on my poem about my mother.. very much appreciated
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Date: 1/6/2009 7:49:00 PM
They made them so much stronger back then. Great job Barbara. Laurie
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Date: 1/6/2009 6:35:00 PM
What a lovely tribute, in just a few words...says so much! ~ Love, Carrie
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