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My Mind

My mind is like waves it knocks at every shore hippos in the water fish swimming within divers in their leisure scientists on study tour feel the pitch of my mind but no one is offended sometimes it gets space that is when it rejoices yet when it attempts to fill the gaps in existence to give meaning to reality primitive waves rise up wanting to swallow it mind’s mouth is censured attempts to open and talk are dangerous games of turmoil

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Date: 5/3/2017 2:42:00 PM
Very interesting write. There may be way too many primitive waves about at times to fight them; but on a calmer sea, if you learn to ride the waves, they may let your mind sail uncensored:) Amitiés
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