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My Mind

My Mind, Open but not open to this world i know as reality is dead and dull my mind as my reality is beauty and full of life Wondering why its hard to feel by whats on the inside as i look in the mirror seeing my mind through my eyes the darkness is there as the sun brightness the way i see my way the path is lit my way is set the shadow down my path are following me where am i going i think my mind knows im lost to myself yet i see what i want im going there just might now be in the right path maybe it will come to a cross road and i will see the shadows getting closer harder to fight off this bottle of pills wont do im broken to the core my heats not alive my mind its fixed my mind has been telling me for so long go to my reality and see yourself in my mirror in that room full of your lost thoughts of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/21/2016 10:05:00 AM
Natoshia Estep, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 1/21/2013 7:50:00 PM
wow.... you expressed your mind and the mind mighty well...enjoyed...pd
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Date: 1/21/2013 7:21:00 PM
Natoshia Estep , stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV PD""
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Date: 1/10/2013 10:58:00 PM
Love ds poem...good poet....coming next time to red more
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Date: 1/10/2013 7:06:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup! Pleasant with the "new poets", you write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Have a enjoyable day - Love from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2013 6:44:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup! Light & Love
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Date: 1/9/2013 4:03:00 PM
Wow. I understand the feeling. Good poem - JH
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