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There’s a sound and smell that brings back memories of the long ago, of those short hours between the work and bed. The family would gather in the front room for awhile. We were relaxed, contented and well fed. Sometimes we’d play card games or Mom would read continued story to us all. In summer evenings we could stay outside for hide and seek, but the dark hours started early in the fall. In those early days of no TV, and no electric wonders when oil lamps substituted for the sun, it took a lot of patience and it took a lot of love and understanding of each other to have fun. Then there were the special evenings when Daddy would get out the heavy iron skillet to pop corn. I would hear those kernels popping and inhale the buttery smell and just be happy that I had been born. He would shake the skillet back and forth on Mama’s kitchen stove then empty it and start another batch. Oh the eagerness that skillet brought when Daddy popped the corn is something that no microwave can match. Now it only takes that popping sound or the smell of melting butter to bring all of the memories flooding back, of those long leisure evening hours we’d spend with one another before Daddy said, “It’s time to hit the sack.” Won 3rd place in Sounds and Smells contest

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Date: 10/26/2010 5:46:00 PM
This is very beautifully written. Modern life has it's advantages but I think we have lost a lot too. Togetherness. This says it all. Well done. Thank you for your kind words on my poems. P.S. My poem "Days of Long Ago" is a little like this one but not quite as eloquent.
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:33:00 PM
Thnx 4 congratulatory msg on my win in "Count your Blessings " contest ..... Luv/best wishes ........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/25/2010 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Frank's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2010 3:48:00 AM
congrats on winning 3rd spot in contest ..... luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/23/2010 8:59:00 PM
DANG, I KNEW i should have written about popcorn. The best smell and sound EVER. LOVE this one and glad to see it got a top spot. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/22/2010 9:36:00 PM
Such a lovely write Joyce. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/22/2010 6:29:00 PM
pop! pop! pop! I just loove the smell of popcorn & yup popping corn on the stove is best-- this sure brought smiles on my face as I imagined this very cozy poem of yours, Joyce! Congrats on your win :)- nikko :)
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Date: 10/21/2010 5:39:00 PM
Well done.. brings back memories..thats how my home was grownig up. congrats. BG
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Date: 10/21/2010 5:19:00 PM
Lovely win! It's amazing how many of us LOVE popcorn and have such good memories associated with it! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 10/21/2010 4:28:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning poetry today!! congrats on the win!
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:56:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joyce
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:43:00 PM
Your poems always give me such a warm feeling of family values. Another beauty by you, Joyce. Lovely as always! ~ Carrie...and ps, thank you so much for your always kind comments. :)
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:27:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your win in Frank's grand contest with this wonderful entry ... a beautiful write and win to enjoy with much success and a victory dance too.. my friend with luv...
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Date: 10/21/2010 1:05:00 PM
Yours was my favorite entry, Joyce. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/20/2010 9:09:00 AM
Yes we all get that sense of nostalgia once in a while.Beautiful image.I saw it through my eyes and what a splendid day that must have been.Best poem i have read today.Love,Jamecia
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:15:00 AM
This one is so nostalgic and 'cosy' I can feel the warmth of a loving family, thoroughly enjoying life together Joyce. It brings back my young days memories before the electronic world got going. Many thanks for your welcome visit and comments. hicky.
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:57:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Joyce. Constance and I seem to have a lot in common, especially when it comes to feelings about family. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:15:00 PM
We did the popcorn when our children were small also because it was something that was good and fun that we could afford...Popcorn sounds and scents always bring that wonderful reminder of good experiences..I am glad that you wrote this one and I am glad that I chose it to read..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:27:00 AM
Dear Joyce, your "memories" brought tears to my eyes. I miss my childhood days and my parents so much. Things were very different then. Families were closer and we appreciated little things like storytelling and popcorn. We had TV when I was a kid, but our parents only let us watch about one hour each evening. They thought it would hurt our eyes and inhibit our physical development. We need only look at today's overweight kids to see how right they were about couch potatoes. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/17/2010 7:24:00 AM
Hi Joyce I like this very much.I find it idyllic and nostalgic.After reading it I feel transported back to a lovely family scene.Thank you for sharing these memories.Your words make me feel warm and uplifted.Thank you also for your kind comments on my own work. luv June(Sylvia)
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:32:00 PM
Joyce, this was gonna be MY topic!!!! But then I decided on the other thing I did. I'm so glad I did not do popcorn since you probably did it the very best it could be done. I ADORE popcorn. How cool that it was the one that entered both our minds! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/16/2010 8:43:00 PM
Lovely write Joyce... full of emotion and reminiscent memories.. enjoyed my friend... if for any contest good luck luv..
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Date: 10/16/2010 3:31:00 PM
Very delightful memories still lives very much with you-Joyce
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Date: 10/16/2010 12:44:00 PM
Kids today have no idea the joy that could come in such simple pleasures as these. Love this memory, Joyce. ~ Carrie
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