My Memories

There’s a sound and smell that brings back
memories of the long ago,
of those short hours between the work and bed.
The family would gather
in the front room for awhile.
We were relaxed, contented and well fed.
Sometimes we’d play card games or Mom
would read continued story to us all.
In summer evenings we could stay 
outside for hide and seek,
but the dark hours started early in the fall.
In those early days of no TV,  
and no electric wonders
when oil lamps substituted for the sun,
it took a lot of  patience
and it took a lot of love
and understanding of each other to have fun.
Then there were the special evenings 
when Daddy would get out
the heavy iron skillet to pop corn.
I would hear those kernels popping and 
inhale the buttery smell
and just be happy that I had been born.
He would shake the skillet back and forth
on Mama’s kitchen stove
then empty it and start another batch.
Oh the eagerness that skillet brought 
when Daddy popped the corn
is something that no microwave can match.
Now it only takes that popping sound
or the smell of melting butter
to bring all of the memories flooding back,
of those long leisure evening hours 
we’d spend with one another
before Daddy said, “It’s time to hit the sack.”


Won 3rd place in Sounds and Smells contest
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Mossburg Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:46 PM
This is very beautifully written. Modern life has it's advantages but I think we have lost a lot too. Togetherness. This says it all. Well done. Thank you for your kind words on my poems. P.S. My poem "Days of Long Ago" is a little like this one but not quite as eloquent.
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 1:33 PM
Thnx 4 congratulatory msg on my win in "Count your Blessings " contest ..... Luv/best wishes ........Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Frank's contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 3:48 AM
congrats on winning 3rd spot in contest ..... luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 8:59 PM
DANG, I KNEW i should have written about popcorn. The best smell and sound EVER. LOVE this one and glad to see it got a top spot. Luv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 9:36 PM
Such a lovely write Joyce. Many congratulations for this win.
K. Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 6:29 PM
pop! pop! pop! I just loove the smell of popcorn & yup popping corn on the stove is best-- this sure brought smiles on my face as I imagined this very cozy poem of yours, Joyce! Congrats on your win :)- nikko :)
Gorelick Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 5:39 PM
Well done.. brings back memories..thats how my home was grownig up. congrats. BG
Guzzi Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Lovely win! It's amazing how many of us LOVE popcorn and have such good memories associated with it! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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October 21, 2010 at 4:28 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning poetry today!! congrats on the win!
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
Richards Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 2:43 PM
Your poems always give me such a warm feeling of family values. Another beauty by you, Joyce. Lovely as always! ~ Carrie...and ps, thank you so much for your always kind comments. :)
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Congrats Joyce on your win in Frank's grand contest with this wonderful entry ... a beautiful write and win to enjoy with much success and a victory dance too.. my friend with luv...
Devonshire Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 1:05 PM
Yours was my favorite entry, Joyce. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Buggs Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Yes we all get that sense of nostalgia once in a while.Beautiful image.I saw it through my eyes and what a splendid day that must have been.Best poem i have read today.Love,Jamecia
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October 20, 2010 at 4:15 AM
This one is so nostalgic and 'cosy' I can feel the warmth of a loving family, thoroughly enjoying life together Joyce. It brings back my young days memories before the electronic world got going. Many thanks for your welcome visit and comments. hicky.
Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Thanks for your comment, Joyce. Constance and I seem to have a lot in common, especially when it comes to feelings about family. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 3:15 PM
We did the popcorn when our children were small also because it was something that was good and fun that we could afford...Popcorn sounds and scents always bring that wonderful reminder of good experiences..I am glad that you wrote this one and I am glad that I chose it to read..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Dear Joyce, your "memories" brought tears to my eyes. I miss my childhood days and my parents so much. Things were very different then. Families were closer and we appreciated little things like storytelling and popcorn. We had TV when I was a kid, but our parents only let us watch about one hour each evening. They thought it would hurt our eyes and inhibit our physical development. We need only look at today's overweight kids to see how right they were about couch potatoes. Love, Carolyn
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October 17, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Hi Joyce I like this very much.I find it idyllic and nostalgic.After reading it I feel transported back to a lovely family scene.Thank you for sharing these memories.Your words make me feel warm and uplifted.Thank you also for your kind comments on my own work. luv June(Sylvia)
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 11:32 PM
Joyce, this was gonna be MY topic!!!! But then I decided on the other thing I did. I'm so glad I did not do popcorn since you probably did it the very best it could be done. I ADORE popcorn. How cool that it was the one that entered both our minds! Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Lovely write Joyce... full of emotion and reminiscent memories.. enjoyed my friend... if for any contest good luck luv..
Mehta Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 3:31 PM
Very delightful memories still lives very much with you-Joyce
Richards Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Kids today have no idea the joy that could come in such simple pleasures as these. Love this memory, Joyce. ~ Carrie
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