My Love Awaits

That is the path I've chosen,
covered with soft blades of grass
hedged with variegated hostas,
and moonlight filtering 
through hanging willow trees.
The winding path tilts slightly uphill,
towards a wooden pergola
that glimmers in the darkness,
a temple built in paradise 
for my lovely Marguerite.

I have planned my life's purpose,
I know so clearly the urge to live,
my priceless gift from Cupid
cleansing the humdrum of this life.
The nightingale enlivens the silence,
full moon oozes limpid serenity,
the glow worms twinkle lovingly
like a myriad of faraway stars.
A lonely breeze caresses my face
but cannot quench the thirst
nor quell the boiling of my blood 
nor the hunger I feel for her.

I gaze upon her lovely face
Chiaroscuro in the moonbeams
A painting mightier than any Madonna
that emanated from Fra Filippo Lippi
Or an intimate impression by Renoir.
Yet like these famous portraits of old
Our love forever will survive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Volumes Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 2:24 PM
How beautiful Victor. The soft sentiment wafts through your words and permeates the feeling of everlasting love as it spills over your poem. Exquisite.
Fowler Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 8:08 AM
Beautiful and romantic Victor. There is pleasure in reading each line. Linda
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November 19, 2022 at 6:49 PM
That’s so lovely Victor, a beautiful tribute to Marguerite, I love that name, my best friend from school has that name and if I’d been blessed with a daughter she’d have been Marguerite… Belle
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November 19, 2022 at 1:44 PM
Beautiful Victor. True love never dies. God Bless my friend. JB ps. When my father's mother died my grandfather sat and cried for a year asking God to take him too because life wasn't worth living without her. He died one year to the day after she did.
M  Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 10:45 PM
Oh Victor Victor….what a beautiful poem of love and romance about your beautiful wife. King of Romance you are!! Debx
Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 4:55 AM
Romantic and introductory work. Introducing famous paintings and painters I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
George Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 1:01 AM
Very romantic and thirsting for your sweet Marguerite in Paradise ! She will be enjoying this, sitting high on her heavenly seat ! Lovely poem dear Victor
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November 16, 2022 at 7:00 PM
Love: Chiaroscuro in the moonbeams. Hugs ~ Kim
Rose  Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 6:09 PM
Your poetry is art in its best form dear friend, thank you for sharing this lovely sentiment.
Buehler Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Enchanting images grace this lovely, romance infused work. It is in my faves.
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 11:19 AM
Fantastic romantic imagery, Victor. A real beauty
Pandit Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 8:25 AM
Awesome imagery from your gifted pen, Victor. This poem is among your best. Every detail so expertly scripted to bring alive the scenes. A FAVE for me.
Roper Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 8:14 AM
Well written verse fully of imagery and feeling. Love the imageries of landscapes. Blessings friend
Poet Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 7:35 AM
A beautiful poem with a romantic undertone.
Messina Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 5:09 AM
So nicely written, Victor. Your wife is smiling, I'm sure. So am I, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 2:19 AM
- A lovely poem spiced with romance, Victor :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 12:43 AM
A very romantic verse with stunning imagery Victor. Tom
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November 16, 2022 at 12:19 AM
Love is from God and love is, indeed, GOD. God bless you Victor. Love, Gina
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