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My Love

you caress my hair and kiss my ruby red lips can I find true love again ? you whisper softly oh is this just your passion? and will this love endure time ? ______________ July 11, 2021 Poetry/Haiku/my love Copyright Protected, ID 07-1371-370-11 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Ni (2) Katuala sponsor, William Kekaula, Judged 07/16/2021 Seventh Place Syllables verified on HMS

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/19/2021 10:36:00 AM

So visual in "ruby red lips" Constance. You pose such real questions of the heart. Congratulations on your win. Sending you many blessings.

Constance La France
Date: 7/19/2021 3:53:00 PM

Sam, thank you for the comment and congratulations _love and serenity _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2021 1:29:00 PM

Chances are taken. The wondering lasts a while to prove itself. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 7/18/2021 8:25:00 AM

Kim, thanks for the congratulations and comment, yes love is like a gambling, you never know if you will win ~ love and serenity _Constance

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 7/17/2021 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Constance. A fine poem. Carol Louise

Constance La France
Date: 7/18/2021 8:26:00 AM

Carol, thanks for the congratulations and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/17/2021 12:30:00 AM

An admirable exposé, Constance, charming a romantic element, endearingly. My compliments truly on your placement my friend, Aloha!

Constance La France
Date: 7/17/2021 6:39:00 AM

William, thanks for the inspiration and the contest and my placement, and your compliment on my poem and win ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/17/2021 12:26:00 AM

Beautifully composed. I tried. Could not. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 7/17/2021 6:40:00 AM

Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, it was not easy ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/16/2021 11:35:00 PM

Superb write, Constance! Congrats on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 7/17/2021 6:41:00 AM

Seeker, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/11/2021 5:25:00 PM

Beautiful. I love it - God bless you sweet friend,. Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2021 3:47:00 AM

Gina, thank you for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 7/11/2021 7:26:00 AM

I must check out this contest, a beautiful poem indeed Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2021 3:48:00 AM

Jan, thank you for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance