My Love

MY LOVE The young lady who is my love Is certainly a cut above She outshines all other women Next to her, they begin dimming She is my joy and my great hope Without her near me, I just mope But when I have her on my arm She is my lovely lucky charm LEI 1 January 2020 for the contest sponsored by Charles Messina

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2020 10:29:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Curtis, congratulations your win. Eve

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/16/2020 11:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve. I do appreciate your never ending support. But, moreover, I appreciate and cherish your friendship.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/16/2020 12:39:00 PM

Congrats, Curtis, on your win in Charlie's contest with this dedication to a, clearly, special lady. Cheers, Gershon

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/16/2020 10:15:00 AM

what a beautiful dedication to your love... wonderfully penned Curtis, congratulations on your win :)

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/16/2020 11:28:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra. I appreciate your support!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/16/2020 8:02:00 AM

Great write, Curtis. Love that last line! Hoping all is well my friend. Congratulations on your win! Always good to see you. Blessings ~Charlie

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/16/2020 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much, Charlie! And thanks for selecting my poem as a winner. All is well considering the personal issues I am dealing with that are occupying a lot of my time. I will explain that later. Blessings to you for this new year we are in!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/1/2020 5:57:00 PM

Hello Curtis Moorman this is a lovely poem you created. The lucky, lucky charm. By for now. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/5/2020 5:51:00 PM

You are welcomed. Have a nice evening my friend.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/1/2020 6:19:00 PM

Darlene, you are a 'darling'! Thanks for your support.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/1/2020 5:57:00 PM

Ah, what a tender tribute! Lovely!

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/1/2020 6:19:00 PM

Thank you, Caren! I hope today as the first day of the New Year was a good one for you and that the entire will go as well.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2020 5:21:00 PM

aww what a charming poem Curtis I hope you shared this with your wife:-) hugs Jan xx

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/1/2020 5:46:00 PM

Thanks, Jan! I will share it with her. I sent you a poem on Soup Mail for you to critique. It is a little lengthy but I think you will enjoy it!

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/1/2020 5:17:00 PM

Bravo, Curtis. For this lovely poem but mostly for the beautiful relationship you have nurtured ~ it takes two to tango.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/1/2020 5:42:00 PM

Thanks, Line. I do love to dance! lol