My Little Room

My Little Room I drive down dirty alleys, playgrounds I once knew, peering through the panes at memory’s sweet view. In this place now quite disfigured, I became. A house can age much faster than people do. My little room was portal to a world, where ‘’dream lives’’ were the joy of a young girl, doctor, teacher, lawyer, first lady or queen diamonds, rubies, gold, a single strand of pearls. I close my eyes, it’s nineteen sixty-three, hearing a young GranMae calling after me. My little room has moved its realm into the tub, holding on a raft, stranded, lost at sea. Amazing, caught up in my play, a juvenile as cities’ tempers raged and burned stark raving wild. My little room was holy, peaceful ground, a temple for a goddess on the Nile. 11/25/16

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Date: 4/26/2018 5:36:00 AM
Love this :) Congratulations on a top win! Just wonderful. xomo
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sian, wonderful poem and memories ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/25/2018 12:27:00 PM
What precious memories, Sian, and so well imaged in your lovely, well-written Rubaiyat. Congrats on your well-deserved podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/25/2018 7:36:00 PM
Thanks and hugs Sandra.
Date: 4/25/2018 9:49:00 AM
I LOVE this. Sometimes I drive by the place where I lived as a child. The house is gone--but not the memories. CONGRATS!! Janice
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/25/2018 7:36:00 PM
Memories cannot be destroyed with demolishing, Thanks.
Date: 4/25/2018 9:14:00 AM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Sian. Your imagery is fabulous and your delivery artful. A beautiful piece.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/25/2018 7:37:00 PM
Great contest. Thanks for the honored placement.
Date: 4/25/2018 5:44:00 AM
So sad to suffer such strife as a child! Can well understand how your room became a temple for a young Goddess on the Nile. Congratulations on your 1st place (Janis, if I may?)... Mick
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/25/2018 7:37:00 PM
Thanks Mick.
Date: 12/19/2016 11:39:00 AM
A serine and nostalgic journey you led us on, congratulations Janis...
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 12/19/2016 2:47:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 12/19/2016 8:59:00 AM
Brings back memories of my happy little room. A pleasure to read. Congratulations, Janis! ...Fran
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 12/19/2016 2:49:00 PM
I glad it took you on a trip down memory lane. Thanks Fran.
Date: 12/8/2016 9:52:00 PM
A very leisurely trip down memory lane, you took the reader on, Janis. Very sweet rubaiyat poem. The last line sums up the essence of nostalgia. That's the kind of feeling it leaves you with. Love and peace to you.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 12/9/2016 4:42:00 PM
Thanks, Freddie. Yea I walk down memory land does leave you with different feeling for the rest of the day. Thanks for your comments. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 11/30/2016 2:01:00 AM
I like the theme of letting go very, very much. I know how difficult it is to let go. Well done and congratulations. Kai
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/30/2016 9:49:00 PM
Thanks Kai. You saw something I didn't, the letting go.
Date: 11/29/2016 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janis. A lovely story. // Barry.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/29/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thanks, Barry.
Date: 11/29/2016 8:41:00 AM
Congrats Janis, this is superb!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/29/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thanks, Sara.
Date: 11/28/2016 7:51:00 PM
Very good poem, Janis , congratulations on your write.. Hugs Eve
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/29/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 11/28/2016 3:22:00 PM
I loved the imagery in your poem Janis congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/28/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thanks, Jan
Date: 11/28/2016 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations Janis on the first placement of the contest.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/28/2016 5:28:00 PM
Loved the Nostalgia theme. I could right much more. Thanks for considering my poem for first placement.
Date: 11/27/2016 1:50:00 PM
The older we grow the more Nostalgia comes to visit, Janis. Your little room served you and your imagination well. I had not only a room, but a whole windmill where I passed the most lovely time of my life!! // paul
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/27/2016 2:01:00 PM
Sounds like the windmill was a great place. It goes to show that imagination runs free. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings, Janis
Date: 11/26/2016 8:44:00 AM
Very nice write ... Cute stars of nostalgia ... Love it ...
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 11/26/2016 7:58:00 PM
Thanks, Probir.
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