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My Life In a Sonnet

I still recall when I had just turned five. I’d started kindergarten. I was shy and wondered sometimes why I was alive and what my purpose even was. No lie! Something kin to emptiness swept through me. I felt invisible! Were I a tune, a melancholy one I had to be! The years passed by, and junior high came soon. From studying and reading, I felt smart. From friendships formed, my confidence could grow. But best of all, I’d opened up my heart! I wed, raised kids; then words began to flow as poetry! Though often I do well, sometimes my thoughts with melancholy swell . . . Sept. 8, 2021 For the Why Am I Me? Poetry Contest Sponsor: Shreya LN

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Date: 10/17/2021 9:40:00 PM
You are a pallette of many nuanced colors, and a river of thoughts both deep and accessible. Obviously you have been a thoughtful person from a very early age. Your sonnets never disappoint, as I think they are where the real you most frequently emerges. Hope you never stop writing them.
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Date: 9/23/2021 7:10:00 AM
Another Great Writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/22/2021 10:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 9/12/2021 3:58:00 AM
Felt by almost everyone, I guess, well written, Andrea:)
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Date: 9/11/2021 4:27:00 PM
This is familiar, well penned piece.
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Date: 9/11/2021 4:13:00 AM
Well written and expressed Andrea :)
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Date: 9/10/2021 12:36:00 PM
Very nice sonnet, Andrea. I like the twist at the end: "as poetry! Thought often I do well/sometimes my thoughts with melancholy swell. Mike
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Date: 9/10/2021 6:35:00 AM
Nice trip down memory lane, Andrea…Delice
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Date: 9/9/2021 10:39:00 PM
Your sonnets have always been superb, and this adds to the list. 'Then words began to flow as poetry' From my point of view, ' a rapid flow'
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2021 4:33:00 PM
thanks so much, Harry.
Date: 9/9/2021 5:51:00 AM
Having read much of your poetry Andrea I believe you'd need a book to encompass the depth and beauty of your life. An interesting Sonnetic synopsis however.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2021 4:33:00 PM
So nice of you to say, John.
Date: 9/9/2021 3:19:00 AM
A very nice take for this contest Ria... Loved this line.. "Best of all... I'd opened up my heart"... Another beautiful Sonnet from you... that I love to read... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/9/2021 2:23:00 AM
New way to write a sonnet? Deftly done.
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Date: 9/9/2021 2:16:00 AM
That's a brilliant sonnet depicting your life story... I loved reading it...
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Date: 9/9/2021 12:32:00 AM
By the (over the pond) by Mrs Mopp is a ckeaning lady Andrwa
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Date: 9/9/2021 12:30:00 AM
Nice rhymes Andrea
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Date: 9/8/2021 8:59:00 PM
Andrea, It's a beautiful Sonnet of a gifted life. All things proper, in place and time. -Richard
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Date: 9/8/2021 6:54:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... such a pleasure to read your sonnets Andrea. They display the true meaning of a sonnet - thanks again Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 9/8/2021 4:56:00 PM
Nicely done Andrea. You express feelings here that I think most of us have felt at one tie or another. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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