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Become my air, pursuing my scent in sweet fragrant fields, where devouring tastes of bohemian spirit, delicately descend in subsistent sighs. Distracting the tones of silence, from subtle susurrus echoes, like a tender sakura breeze kissing fresh lavender blossoms. Set adrift in shades of yesterday, dandelions bloom in flourishing orchards, prostrating to the mercy of your grace. But tread carefully through the hall of dream crashers, where strange streams from nightmarish tears, drizzle down, composing somber serenades, choreographed from an enchanted symphony. For l've seen the invisible reality, twinkling across streetlights of sumptuous stars. Distance is an unspoken truth, just a rainbow away from roaming freely, within an evergreen paradise above bougainvillea skies. If this was the last poem, before my last sigh, today will be the day, red of rose will kill my bleeding ink, so let lyrical acrolect of poetry fill your thoughts, look for 'you' and 'I in the island of love, where there's no thunder without lightning, nor “sea" without 'waves of us' These distractions of desolated dunes are mere signs of the wounded warrior within me. I'm waltzing through vibrant valleys of white lilies, in the hope of finding lost gravity, which overcomes trials and trepidation. l'll always be your lighthouse on lonely nights, at the edge of bioluminescent sand lines. A haven where your clusters of couplets, will transcribe an alchemist's poetic remedy. Each verse will portray the personal poem of my soul, infused in a profusion of soothing cosmic hues. As raindrops kiss your face, they'll heal those lamenting leather lips- for you are the wind carrying clouds, I am the ripples crying to touch your sky.

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Date: 2/9/2024 2:37:00 PM
Beautifully written! I want to point out particular lines to express my favor of them but every line is beautiful enough to be it's own poem. I'm in awe of your writing, Empress. Amazing!
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Date: 12/28/2023 8:38:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, my imagination rejoices in your expressive golden pen and my heart embraces your creative poetic spirit! Your poet's soul shines! A stunning impassioned piece rich in imagery and metaphors, but your last four lines, especially, resonate with deep emotion for a powerfully poignant finale. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes to you, my friend, for a happy new year filled with light, peace and poetic inspiration.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/27/2023 11:19:00 AM
So beautiful my dear... Congratulations...
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Date: 9/25/2023 10:59:00 AM
Delightful...Masterful and a great encouragement for poets to know that they will have a last write!
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Date: 9/19/2023 7:50:00 AM
What can I say, perfection!
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Date: 9/20/2023 11:53:00 PM
So kind of you to say thank you so much
Date: 9/18/2023 8:52:00 PM
"this was the last poem, before my last sigh, today will be the day, red of rose will kill my bleeding ink, so let lyrical acrolect of poetry fill your thoughts, look for 'you' and 'I in the island of love, where there's no thunder without lightning, nor “sea" without 'waves of us' These distractions of desolated dunes" your build up at the Entro was worth it's weight in gold, dear Ink Empress...you kept your promise with each verse Congratulations on your win! Love it with all my soul. ;)
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Date: 9/19/2023 1:59:00 AM
Awwn sweeet soul i appreciate your generous and kind feedback truly. Thank you for reading and for leaving your thoughts and well wishes. Grateful
Date: 9/18/2023 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your high finish in the contest, Ink, you certainly deserve it. Every line has the imagery to paint a picture for us the readers. Thank you for sharing your gift with us, my friend. Bill
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and well wishes truly grateful
Date: 9/18/2023 4:09:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! Thank you for sponsoring the ocean contest! And for your kind words.
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and i appreciate your gratitude
Date: 9/18/2023 3:57:00 PM
from subtle susurrus echoes, like a tender sakura breeze… an evergreen paradise above bougainvillea skies…choosing the lonely lighthouse as your metaphor for lonely nights! Very nice!
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and well wishes
Date: 9/18/2023 2:40:00 PM
Unique imagery crafted with eloquence and sensitivity.. your ink irrigates thirsty souls and fills them with a passion for poetry! Your genuine words heals and enriches the heart.. as they open wide the gates of imagination and wonder! You mark the heart with your unique poetry.. Congratulations dear Empress on your top win! A poetry deserving all the honour and recognition.. God bless you. Best regards.
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:10:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your visit and well wishes truly grateful
Date: 9/18/2023 1:38:00 PM
This is so beautiful and it's haunting, IE... please don't give up; your gift says too much. A hug for you to wrap around, me <3
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:10:00 AM
Awwn thank you paige you are so sweet. Grateful for your kindness
Date: 9/18/2023 11:07:00 AM
I don't need to comment on this one, just look at the feedback you have received with justifies the excellence of your poem. You really know how to weave your words to impress my.. You know im not much of a reader, but your poem really moved me.. so many great lines, where do I start... my favourite is the one about the lighthouse on lonely lights, that is such a beautiful way to describe how you will be there for someone in their time of need. Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 9/18/2023 12:09:00 PM
Shocking! Really, all i can say is.. Just thank you! I guess knowing and reading you and learning from you, for more than 3 years does pay off. We need to kno who we writing for. They say. And i am grateful to be placed as 2nd, your selection of poems were all brilliant. I dnt write to win, i write to support u! Always! Thank u silent one
Date: 9/18/2023 9:12:00 AM
"you are the wind carrying clouds, I am the ripples crying to touch your sky." You have created a phantasmagoria of love and romance! Each word and each image leaves a pleasantly penetrating feel. Yours is stunning poetry. From the very beginning, I am a fan of your poems! Who is not? Reign, reign in the realm of poetry, you regal Empress! Into my FAVE.
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:17:00 AM
Awwn sweet soul you are such a kind soul for fave ing and leaving such generous thoughts. Thank you so much for feeling my poem
Date: 9/18/2023 5:55:00 AM
I am absolutely captivated by this piece, my dear, Ink. The way it delves into the depths of emotion and paints such a vivid picture is truly awe-inspiring. The brilliance and richness of your writing have touched me on a profound level. Every word seems to unveil the essence of the poet, poetry, and the poem. This piece is a revelation, a moment of pure grace, a gift from the depths of your soul. My best wishes to you with the contest.
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:25:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend you are so kind and generous, always grateful for your support
Date: 9/18/2023 5:49:00 AM
Fabulous poetry my "alien" friend. A poetess of multiple talents. Your last stanza is so endearing. "I'll always be your lighthouse on lonely nights... as raindrops kiss your face you'll find healing... I am the ripples crying to touch your sky." Who wouldn't want to be your friend with such comforting poetic lines? And, if you have a significant other, lucky he is to have someone with such emotional depth, and so much to give
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Date: 9/18/2023 8:18:00 AM
Hahaha i am truly an alien, im from venus, and we speak the language of kindness which humankind wont understand and would find strange, as kindness is rare, it takes a strong soul to be kind despite all that theyve been fed. And being a psychologist means, we understand where hate and insecurities come from, its a sad dark place which i only hope would be brighter for earthlings, thank u my friend u be you! And my partner and beloved is “poetry” i am in a serious relationship with poetry: much thanks always for ur support
Date: 9/18/2023 4:57:00 AM
Each verse will portray the personal poem of my soul, infused in a profusion of soothing cosmic hues. As raindrops kiss your face, they'll heal those lamenting leather lips-for you are the wind carrying clouds, I am the ripples crying to touch your sky--Oh, how so wonderfully poetic and charming--yet another stunning creation, Ink. A FAVE!
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:33:00 AM
Thank you vijay always for your kindness and for your unwavering support, you have been nothing but kind and supportive. I appreciate that truly, for reading and also the fave
Date: 9/18/2023 1:24:00 AM
You are killing me here x with.. "l'll always be your lighthouse on lonely nights, at the edge of bioluminescent sand lines". Love that. I sincerely hope this is nowhere close to your last poem!! I am just recovering and then.. "I am the ripples crying to touch your sky." I need to sit down. Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:58:00 AM
Oh wow sam you really made me feel like my poem was good enough so kind of you thank u so much for feeling my poem so grateful to have readers like u
Date: 9/18/2023 12:53:00 AM
If this was your last poem it would be treasured, every line, every word is precious. A wonderful free verse Ink… Belle
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Date: 9/19/2023 3:00:00 AM
This is such a beautiful comment belle i appreciate you
Date: 9/17/2023 11:54:00 PM
Mmmmmm that start Papi … become my air pursing my scent in sweet fragrant fields..oooo tread carefully through the hall dream crashers .. mmmmmmm where r they aeee??? I shall walk in with a machete!!! Like u said aee For I have seen the invisible reality.. mmmhmm .. love that ending tho.. u r the wind carrying clouds um the ripple crying to touch ur sky.. marvelous papi
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Date: 9/17/2023 11:44:00 PM
Even the stars will get jealous of your poetry . You are a true talented one . Keep it up
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Date: 9/17/2023 11:42:00 PM
Very deep . Love it ??
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Date: 9/17/2023 11:21:00 PM
such a beautiful write, words that reveal the poet, the poetry, the poem that could never truly be - the last, unless the poet has permanently left the scene. this is a revelation, a grace, a gracious moment from the soul. I just love it. Ingenious. God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 9/17/2023 10:32:00 PM
My gosh, dearest Ink! This definitely has to be one of my most favourites from you!!! The depth, vividness and brilliance of this piece has made me go wow.. How you've defined the last poem, as the declaration of love just before the "red of rose" will bleed in the last ink, but I hope it's never this way! Your magnificent ink is meant to paint streaks of eloquence and marvel, upon our hearts yearning to feel the beauty of poetry.. This is such a treasure of a write! I admire so many lines here
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Date: 9/17/2023 10:36:00 PM
"As raindrops kiss your face, they'll heal those lamenting leather lips- for you are the wind carrying clouds, I am the ripples crying to touch your sky" That ending has just stolen my heart, my gosh.. This certainly can't be your last poem ever, we are surely getting the pleasure of reading your masterpieces forever :)
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Date: 9/17/2023 10:35:00 PM
Especially "red of rose will kill my bleeding ink, so let lyrical acrolect of poetry fill your thoughts, look for 'you' and 'I in the island of love, where there's no thunder without lightning, nor “sea" without 'waves of us'" Those yearning shades of final wish can be felt so poignantly here.."I'm waltzing through vibrant valleys of white lilies, in the hope of finding lost gravity," No matter how many trials and tribulations come, true love always triumphs above all

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