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My Kitty the Dreamer (Crystal)

A sophisticated strut quite arrogant in her theatrical play on the move creeping silent nights, lounging in bliss throughout the day A king of her domain strength and pose a simple gift of prestige very few shall ever touch, no other shall come close to her league With white boots in the moon light slinky and smooth a true heart of a gangster with something to prove A beast of an arrogant notion, a lioness in the midst of the hunt searching for her prey my clever satin love cunning and pure robed in a coat of armor with accents of grey A sophisticated strut quite arrogant in her theatrical play on the move creeping silent nights, lounging in bliss throughout the day Written By Rick Parise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/7/2010 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "Cat Poems~~". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2010 4:59:00 PM
Ah....Kitty love....can't beat it! Of course they love you when they feel like it. Very nice to see you in the winner's circle with this fine entry Rick. Congratulations! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 9/3/2010 6:50:00 PM
Congratulations! Rick a nice arrangement of rhymes in your Couplet. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:43:00 PM
Congratulations on the win with this fine write, Rick
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Date: 9/3/2010 10:11:00 AM
I love how you describe your cat. sounds marvelous! congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/2/2010 7:12:00 PM
Great description of an independent, royal cat. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:47:00 PM
wonderful piece, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:22:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your purr fect win in the CAT contest... enjoyed this entry .. have a safe and happy holiday weekend..with luv..my friend..
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:48:00 PM
Rick, Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/30/2010 9:41:00 AM
love the description of a sophisticated strut....
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Date: 8/28/2010 10:49:00 AM
Love the way you describe your cat as the "king of her domain," Rick. They all think we live to serve their needs, but we do get lots of affection in return. Also enjoyed seeing her portrayed as a lioness on the hunt. Great entry for the Cat Contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2010 7:20:00 AM
reminds me of my kitty...well written!
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:02:00 AM
Interesting write on My Kitty The Dreamer, Rick
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Date: 8/28/2010 3:11:00 AM
Excellent work in this one..It is subtle in that it is a cat but also suggest that this could be a person...Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks again for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciating you taking the time to do that.. Sara
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Date: 8/28/2010 1:36:00 AM
Great Couplet Rick......Larry
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