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My Jingle Just Left

Dashing through the malls, in my brand new bright orange Crocks, I know it's cold today, so I put on fresh wool socks. Bells on churches ring, as I run from store to store, my arms are really full, they just can't hold any more. I must leave, I must leave, my jingle has gone away, my credit cards are no good now, cause they have been denied today. Entered in John's Christmas Contest... sing to the tune of Jingle Bells.... I am still trying to enter this one, but I am having no luck....

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Date: 12/5/2008 5:48:00 AM
Great one! lol I love the image of the bright orange Crocs! Good luck in the contest! ~Juliane
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Date: 11/28/2008 4:20:00 PM
LOL! This jingle had me grinning from ear to ear! Although we may enjoy ordering Christmas gifts via the Internet - the chaos at the shopping malls instills a quiet giggle within me! LOL! Wishing you and your loved ones Happy Holidays. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/22/2008 12:54:00 PM
good luck, this was very creative I loved it very cute! Made me smile :) Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 11/20/2008 11:56:00 AM
Got a good chuckle out of this one. Don't dash too much. Thanks for bring some joy to the season with this one. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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Date: 11/20/2008 11:37:00 AM
a very cute little piece, wish you luck, or should say good fortune. it was a good one and you should enter it, i would vote for it to win, aren't I the suck up, no it is really good.
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Date: 11/20/2008 10:34:00 AM
Great lyric Christy and good luck...Raul
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Date: 11/20/2008 10:13:00 AM
Ha ha! Don't know what I'm laughing at - better than crying, right? This is perfect and timely dear Christy and very well done! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/20/2008 8:20:00 AM
How cute...a lot of people will relate to this shopping spree!! ;) ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/20/2008 6:29:00 AM
HA! That was funny, and sadly, so true! My cards are sure to be full after this year. lol love Kristin
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Date: 11/20/2008 6:08:00 AM
Now dah away- dash-away all..straight to the bank. I dont think theres much left there either. Cute write. BG
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