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MY ISLAND GIRL

Island girl
I've got my eyes on you
Loving the way you move
So smooth
Longing for you hand
My song
Take me to your wonderland
Come on
Cause together, island girl
Just us two...
We can groove 

Yeah, you don't know 
What you've been missing
But when I catch you girl
We'll be all night kissing
And feeling those waves 
Going deep sea fishing
Making love

Island girl
Show up in all my dreams
Sweet island girl
Your heat, turning me to steam
To gaze on you, so nice
To hold you.. I'll bring the ice
Oh, the sound of tropical tunes
Under the stars, it's a lover's moon
Can't resist.. I'm coming soon
Upon your shore
My island girl

Yeah, you don't know 
What you've been missing
But when I catch you girl
We'll be all night kissing
And feeling those waves 
Going deep sea fishing
Making love

I can't resist.. I'm coming soon
Upon your shore
You're all I want and more

Yeah, you don't know 
What you've been missing
But when I catch you girl
We'll be all night kissing
And feeling those waves 
Going deep sea fishing
Making love to you...
Island girl

~Written as a Collaboration for Duets: I Shall Collaborate With You Poetry Contest sponsored by James Edward Lee Sr

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/1/2018 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful write Lyric and Jan...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:54:00 PM
Very lovely collaboration from both of you. Congratulations Dave and Jan. A sweet song! : )
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:06:00 PM
Congrats on your wi, LM. Collaboration well executed.
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful!
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:58:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Congratulations on your win, LM & Jan!
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Date: 7/30/2018 11:02:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on your collaborating win, Lyric Man & Jan, nicely done. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/30/2018 6:18:00 AM
Ah, so tender, and just a little sizzly - gorgeous flow - well done you two!
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Date: 6/24/2018 2:14:00 PM
Is this really you Lyric Man? :)..WoW what an awesome collaboration.Glad to stop by and say hi to some souper friends.
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/24/2018 2:43:00 PM
Indeed it is.. so happy to see you Charms!
Date: 6/22/2018 2:32:00 PM
When I complete the prayer I began last nite, I shall recall Islands like Jamaica, St. Kitts, Trinidad, St. Vincent (sadly Grenada lost to Germany - but not in the WORLD Cup). Collaboration in Poetry & Song is so lyrical & beautiful. Blessings
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Date: 6/21/2018 10:47:00 PM
It was a joy to read your beautiful song like poem dear friend Lyric and Jan. Great Collaboration by both of you. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you once again for visiting my Yoga Page....Ravindra
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Date: 6/21/2018 10:41:00 AM
Quite the duet, makes me want to put on a pair of shorts and consider snorkeling, well done you two...
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Date: 6/21/2018 10:04:00 AM
Ahh, you and Jan have written a really beautiful poem here, certainly a joy to read, I assume that it s for the contest so best of luck in it, good luck and have a nice day
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 10:33:00 AM
Faraz, you are more than kind with these lovely comments.. and I assure you that I am more than grateful!
Date: 6/21/2018 8:53:00 AM
I fully understand if you don't want to enter the contest so I will post it just as a collaboration with my lovely friend Lyric Man and see if anyone else is willing to collaborate with me for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 4:21:00 PM
Ok :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/21/2018 12:02:00 PM
Hi Dave, we BOTH need to enter the contest, if you are willing to enter the contest with me then you need to take our names off the poem as no names are allowed for contests (things have changed since you last entered them) hugs jan xx
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 9:15:00 AM
Wait what? No, I want you to enter it for the contest!
Date: 6/21/2018 7:50:00 AM
What a great collaboration. Two powerhouse poets. It good to see Lyric Man hasn’t lost his touch.
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Date: 6/21/2018 4:53:00 AM
A wonderful song you have penned with Jan, Lyric Man. My compliments to you both. T.J
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, Teppo!
Date: 6/21/2018 12:37:00 AM
You created this poem so brilliantly it is as if it was only written by one. A really wonderful collaboration from you both! : )
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 6:50:00 AM
We develop the story idea and the setting before we pen the first word. That congruence of thought hopefully pays off in a seamless write. Thank you for your kind confirmation of what we set out to do.
Date: 6/20/2018 10:00:00 PM
Waves are crashing and love collides. So beautiful, romantic and very dreamy. Your thoughts blend so well together. :) Maia
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 6:51:00 AM
I love that your feeling it, Maia.. you express beautifully what our goal was in this write.
Date: 6/20/2018 7:05:00 PM
This is nice.. nice to see you again, Lyric Man :)Hugs Eve ~ ‘ *
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 6/20/2018 6:49:00 PM
oh Dave the poem turned out absolutely brilliantly, it was SO SO good to write with you again, just like the old days when we first joined soup:-) Hugs from this 'Island girl' lol:-) soup mail:-) xx
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:06:00 AM
Jan, this was so fun! I worked a bit more on the chorus. You can post for the contest, I don't really do those anymore.
Date: 6/20/2018 4:59:00 PM
Charming poetry! Fun read, this bouncy poem is!! A wonderful collaboration.. kudos to both..Lyric Man, and Jan.
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:03:00 AM
Vijay..This lyric does have a bouncy rythme to it.. so awesome you picked up on that without this write even being put to music!
Date: 6/20/2018 3:19:00 PM
Wow! What a wonderfully steamy collaboration, Dave and Jan! The reader can feel the rhythm in each line. "Island Girl" is sure to place high in the contest. Best wishes to both of you, Carolyn
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:04:00 AM
Hey, Jan wanted steamy.. what's a boy to do ;). I did try to keep it a respectable steamy though.
Date: 6/20/2018 2:17:00 PM
Hi Lyric. I agree with Nette, you and Jan make beautiful music together. I enjoyed these lyrics very much. I like the island vibe and tone of this piece. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 6/21/2018 1:07:00 PM
Hi Lyric, I would love to write with you:-) Alexis
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:08:00 AM
I travel for a living and the "island vibe" is definitely a favorite. Thanks for your kindness. Let's write together soon.
Date: 6/20/2018 1:51:00 PM
you and jan make beautiful music together, D...i am thrilled!... huggs
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:11:00 AM
Thank you, Nette.. this was Jan's idea and I just sort of tagged along.