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My Island Girl

Island girl I've got my eyes on you Loving the way you move So smooth Longing for you hand My song Take me to your wonderland Come on Cause together, island girl Just us two... We can groove Yeah, you don't know What you've been missing But when I catch you girl We'll be all night kissing And feeling those waves Going deep sea fishing Making love Island girl Show up in all my dreams Sweet island girl Your heat, turning me to steam To gaze on you, so nice To hold you.. I'll bring the ice Oh, the sound of tropical tunes Under the stars, it's a lover's moon Can't resist.. I'm coming soon Upon your shore My island girl Yeah, you don't know What you've been missing But when I catch you girl We'll be all night kissing And feeling those waves Going deep sea fishing Making love I can't resist.. I'm coming soon Upon your shore You're all I want and more Yeah, you don't know What you've been missing But when I catch you girl We'll be all night kissing And feeling those waves Going deep sea fishing Making love to you... Island girl ~Written as a Collaboration for Duets: I Shall Collaborate With You Poetry Contest sponsored by James Edward Lee Sr

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Joseph May

Date: 8/1/2018 1:26:00 PM

Beautiful write Lyric and Jan...Congrats on your win..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/31/2018 9:54:00 PM

Very lovely collaboration from both of you. Congratulations Dave and Jan. A sweet song! : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/31/2018 9:06:00 PM

Congrats on your wi, LM. Collaboration well executed.

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/31/2018 6:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful!

Moon Flower

Date: 7/31/2018 9:58:00 AM

Simply beautiful. Congratulations on your win, LM & Jan!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/30/2018 11:02:00 AM

Back with big congratulations on your collaborating win, Lyric Man & Jan, nicely done. Hugs Eve

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/24/2018 2:14:00 PM

Is this really you Lyric Man? :)..WoW what an awesome collaboration.Glad to stop by and say hi to some souper friends.

Lyric Man
Date: 6/24/2018 2:43:00 PM

Indeed it is.. so happy to see you Charms!

Anil Deo

Date: 6/22/2018 2:32:00 PM

When I complete the prayer I began last nite, I shall recall Islands like Jamaica, St. Kitts, Trinidad, St. Vincent (sadly Grenada lost to Germany - but not in the WORLD Cup). Collaboration in Poetry & Song is so lyrical & beautiful. Blessings

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/21/2018 10:47:00 PM

It was a joy to read your beautiful song like poem dear friend Lyric and Jan. Great Collaboration by both of you. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you once again for visiting my Yoga Page....Ravindra

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/21/2018 10:41:00 AM

Quite the duet, makes me want to put on a pair of shorts and consider snorkeling, well done you two...

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/21/2018 10:04:00 AM

Ahh, you and Jan have written a really beautiful poem here, certainly a joy to read, I assume that it s for the contest so best of luck in it, good luck and have a nice day

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 10:33:00 AM

Faraz, you are more than kind with these lovely comments.. and I assure you that I am more than grateful!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/21/2018 8:53:00 AM

I fully understand if you don't want to enter the contest so I will post it just as a collaboration with my lovely friend Lyric Man and see if anyone else is willing to collaborate with me for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 4:21:00 PM

Ok :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2018 12:02:00 PM

Hi Dave, we BOTH need to enter the contest, if you are willing to enter the contest with me then you need to take our names off the poem as no names are allowed for contests (things have changed since you last entered them) hugs jan xx

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 9:15:00 AM

Wait what? No, I want you to enter it for the contest!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/21/2018 7:50:00 AM

What a great collaboration. Two powerhouse poets. It good to see Lyric Man hasn’t lost his touch.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/21/2018 12:37:00 AM

You created this poem so brilliantly it is as if it was only written by one. A really wonderful collaboration from you both! : )

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 6:50:00 AM

We develop the story idea and the setting before we pen the first word. That congruence of thought hopefully pays off in a seamless write. Thank you for your kind confirmation of what we set out to do.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/20/2018 10:00:00 PM

Waves are crashing and love collides. So beautiful, romantic and very dreamy. Your thoughts blend so well together. :) Maia

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 6:51:00 AM

I love that your feeling it, Maia.. you express beautifully what our goal was in this write.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/20/2018 7:05:00 PM

This is nice.. nice to see you again, Lyric Man :)Hugs Eve ~ ‘ *

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:01:00 AM

Thank you, Eve!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/20/2018 6:49:00 PM

oh Dave the poem turned out absolutely brilliantly, it was SO SO good to write with you again, just like the old days when we first joined soup:-) Hugs from this 'Island girl' lol:-) soup mail:-) xx

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:06:00 AM

Jan, this was so fun! I worked a bit more on the chorus. You can post for the contest, I don't really do those anymore.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/20/2018 4:59:00 PM

Charming poetry! Fun read, this bouncy poem is!! A wonderful collaboration.. kudos to both..Lyric Man, and Jan.

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:03:00 AM

Vijay..This lyric does have a bouncy rythme to it.. so awesome you picked up on that without this write even being put to music!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/20/2018 3:19:00 PM

Wow! What a wonderfully steamy collaboration, Dave and Jan! The reader can feel the rhythm in each line. "Island Girl" is sure to place high in the contest. Best wishes to both of you, Carolyn

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:04:00 AM

Hey, Jan wanted steamy.. what's a boy to do ;). I did try to keep it a respectable steamy though.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/20/2018 2:17:00 PM

Hi Lyric. I agree with Nette, you and Jan make beautiful music together. I enjoyed these lyrics very much. I like the island vibe and tone of this piece. Excellent job:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/21/2018 1:07:00 PM

Hi Lyric, I would love to write with you:-) Alexis

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:08:00 AM

I travel for a living and the "island vibe" is definitely a favorite. Thanks for your kindness. Let's write together soon.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2018 1:51:00 PM

you and jan make beautiful music together, D...i am thrilled!... huggs

Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:11:00 AM

Thank you, Nette.. this was Jan's idea and I just sort of tagged along.