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My Inspiration

I sit here and wish you were by my side my L O V E o
you are my muse my inspiration the years gone by have not diminished my love for you
AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on September 20, 2018 for contest LATE SEPTEMBER 2018 STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND and August 23, 2018 for contest PICTURE IT POETRY sponsored by MAUREEN McGREAVY

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Date: 8/24/2018 11:52:00 PM
Line, this one fairly dances off the page with a faerie like quality that is amazingly fun!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/25/2018 12:36:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/24/2018 8:05:00 PM
Very beautiful, Line, both your moving poem and the poetry form. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/25/2018 12:37:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/24/2018 7:52:00 PM
GREAT!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/25/2018 12:37:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy.
Date: 8/24/2018 11:55:00 AM
This is a beautiful shape. I see a genie coming out of a bottle.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/24/2018 12:25:00 PM
Of course you would, that's what your muse looks like. LOL Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Dale. Always appreciated.
Date: 8/24/2018 10:39:00 AM
I see a feather sticking out of someone's hat lol...of course pen and ink...and of course a winning concrete, Line..love & concrete...^WW^
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/24/2018 10:53:00 AM
You are too kind, WW. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 8/23/2018 9:59:00 PM
O.K., I give up. I admit that I'm not sure what the concrete shape is. Please tell me. (I'm sure I will feel like the fool I am for not recognizing it)… At any rate, it IS an enchanting form, and the poem is enchanting too. :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2018 10:38:00 PM
Thanks for letting me know. Now I'll tell you that first I thought it was a candle, and then I thought maybe a genie let out of a bottle. So much for my 'brilliance.' … Peace and Joy, gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/23/2018 10:19:00 PM
LOL - it is supposed to be pen and ink ! It was very obvious in my head, Gershon...

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