My Imperfectly Perfect World

deep and late into the hem of night my thoughts question uncertainties, perhaps my heart does not believe in life anymore, and deem men as anti-heroes; so i lock the door of my tactile pores, yet i speak of men in my accepted duality somehow, honoring the smell of their laughter, and their taste of affection with anger to sketch their contours with my skin on white linen between ceiling and lamp; that when i open my eyes to look at their faces, i see the whole universe. then to recall how gazing through a skyline the moon reflects tints of past flames and strangers, as peak of moments’ rapture explodes slicing the darkness ...changing whimpers to wonder... that all i could say is “ thank you”, appreciating my imperfectly perfect world... i recall filling a basin of warmth for them when streams of giving chains me in the under –toe of hunger’s ebbs and tides,
embracing the divine wonder in their beings.
------------------- * if we perceive a man or woman from a perspective of seeing his/ her inner beauty despite some flaws, wouldn't it be a wonderful place to be? *inspired by Louis Armstrong’ “ what a wonderful world” http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RCp3K3XUhvU Frank H's I Recall Contest by nette onclaud
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A  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 11:46 AM
Nette:) CONGRATULATIONS! Enjoyed your win............... Love ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 7:37 PM
Nette, nicely done.... congrats in Frank's contest.... xox~ LINDA
Puddifoot Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 7:00 AM
very deep writing here, nette - I love 'the hem of night' and 'I lock the door of my tactile pores' - congrats on your win! :)
Mehta Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 9:56 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Frank, nette
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 8:36 PM
First one I've read of yours, well written ,and you won with this -Good job! Anxious to read more... MC
Johnson Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 7:50 PM
Something to ponder. Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
Posey Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 6:36 PM
Great writing, sweetheart. I loved every line.... Just one rhetorical question... "How can we expect others to find in us that which we cannot find ourselves?" .. Congratulations.... Jake
Deschler Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 6:01 PM
I have always had trouble finding my own self identity. Because, I was always judged from the outside-in, instead of from the inside-out. This world would be so wonderful if we did not judge people at all! A great poem, with a great message!...Thank you very much for the great comments, Nette!
Poet Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 1:17 PM
Another excellent poem here Nette!Loved it1
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 5:20 AM
You do not have to pretend to be what you already are! Poetry and insight interwoven with skill to produce excellence!
Dey Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 10:17 PM
This is a wonderful poem.Your perfect words are not imperfectly taken...This poem says they are coming from deep.Nice one to read
Dunn Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 9:42 PM
No world or man is perfect but this write expresses how alot of people feel most of the time. I enjoyed this poem very much thank you for sharing it with us readers. thank you also for your comments.
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 9:24 PM
gosh, you got something very different from that song than I ever did, but very creative work, Nette. I really like that title too.It's SO true!!
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 5:52 PM
To my favs
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 5:50 PM
Ow how it is that we shsre our innerself in relationships yet looking back each love gone becomes a stranger.Strange how emotions fade but true.Re men..We love them and We hate them as the saying goes.We can t stand them yet can t live without them...I love this poem..gives me a sad yet beautiful melanchonic nostalgia..To freeze time...but time moves on..yet love can be behind the door.One of my favs. of youts dear Nettie..Just beautiful
Ay Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 5:28 PM
Beautiful and creative falls off the tongue so easily. Art!
Ponce Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:49 AM
Hi, Nette! How're you doing? While I was reading this I swear Joni Mitchell's "Both Sides Now" was playing in my mind. I was pleasantly surprised by the fact that it was inspired by another great song. I really love this poetic and autobiographical piece and I'm really crazy about your kind of imagery. *Vigorous applause
Paras Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:36 AM
To feel, see the beauty of life in all its textures and still wonder at how it is perfect in your eyes is a marvel. I hope you think of men in the same vein. Deeply moving poetry at its best. ---MP
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October 23, 2013 at 9:34 AM
Exceptional! Your work has a pulse all it's own. I think this is one of your best.77777777 and too my favorites.
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October 23, 2013 at 8:38 AM
A great mysterious poem depicted the bitter sweet reality of life. Excellently done my friend. Loved always, bl
Manassian Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Nette.....we all long for glory days...Lately...I've been really struggling with this issue...Oh to be who I was......lovely write inspited by a lovely song...
Mehta Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Very deep inner thoughts of introspection, nette
Sivey Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 6:47 AM
I feel your pain my friend, I know exactly what you mean within this incredible write! I really liked the line, "...to sketch their contours with my skin on white linen between ceiling and lamp;" Such an explanation is tremendous my friend! I feel a poem coming to mind from your ingenious piece here Nette, I can't help it, you inspire me! Great Work on this creative poem!!
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 5:28 AM
Very well thoughout work..Enjoyed reading this contest entry today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 3:41 AM
- I agree with : Louis Armstrong’ “ what a wonderful world” - and a wonderful poem,Nette. (My mother loved Louis Armstrong's songs, this was played often in my childhood home.) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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