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My Heart's Window

the w i n d o w of my heart stays ajar. my permission you don't need. sneak in! yes, darling, do so, anytime; enter anyhow you deem fit. after all, my heart is very much your home it's... your sanctuary (yalto) Writing Challenge - W words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme of choice: Window Syllable count: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5. Date written: 04/23/2023

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Constance La France

Date: 4/27/2023 11:57:00 AM

Edward, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations, great form !

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/5/2023 3:41:00 PM

Thank you very for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/27/2023 7:42:00 AM

Love this yalto Edward. I see why it placed first. Congratulations on your win! :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/5/2023 3:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda:-) I'm glad you did!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2023 6:41:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Edward :) - Beautiful written :) - hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/5/2023 3:43:00 PM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2023 3:48:00 AM

A very inviting work found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/5/2023 3:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara:-)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/26/2023 8:33:00 PM

"my heart is very much your home" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/5/2023 3:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/26/2023 6:55:00 PM

Wow! Edward, This is a good take on the contest theme. Nice use of the chosen word. Stellar content, shape, and imagery. Congratulations on your 1-place win. Have a good evening;-) Alexis

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/5/2023 3:45:00 PM

Thank you very much, Alexis:-)

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2023 5:32:00 PM

This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/5/2023 3:46:00 PM

Thank you very much for your wonderful perspective and visit, Lasaad:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/26/2023 2:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love the way you did the window/heart. Have a great/blessed day..............

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/5/2023 3:47:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/24/2023 5:55:00 AM

Beautiful--romantic--awesome invitation to love! You always shine in this form you invented. A FAVE for me.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/24/2023 7:34:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Vijay:-) I appreciate the fave, my friend.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/24/2023 12:46:00 AM

I really love Yaltos. I have dozens filed away as I suppose you do too. This one is particularly good Edward, it is a fine entry for the contest. There is always an impressive uniqueness about the items you post.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/23/2023 6:24:00 PM

Very nice, Edward. From one heart to another:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/23/2023 7:35:00 PM

Thank you very much Daniel:-)