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Straight up, straight down, then back to the middle, All with a musical voice, Dressed in red, for fire and blood, Creating the most beautiful noise, Like that of a drum, the slow thumping drum, The hypnotically traditional song, He creates a rhythm we both can live by, With a chorus where we both belong, And my favourite bit is when he jumps in the air, He pulls all of me out of my seat, It happens whenever I look to your smile, It’s as though he just misses a beat, He’s my zigzagging line forever weaving a course, He’s my honest and reliable friend, Who wants to hold you my beautiful girl, Hold you right up to the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/18/2020 8:53:00 PM
Awe.. this is so beautiful and romantic. When the heart flutters, it is a wonderful feeling indeed. Love surrounds you. :) Brandy
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Date: 3/19/2020 8:21:00 PM
Hi Brandy, when our hearts miss a beat is love, when the beats magnify it's love. thanks for your thoughts :)

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