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My Heart Weeps For Eternity

Father I pray that you will touch my heart as I piece this entry, let my ink flow onto this paper Caress my heart as it cracks, amend my broken spirit that hungers for your word Father Set your eyes on mine that I may keep them open long enough to write of patient days and time of joy I no longer stand to be the romantic I was saw in my mirror but a man of the world whom is dead Uplift me my God that I will praise you my king, in Jesus name amen. I raced against time itself only to fall on my face faster than the sunt sets I once had her by my side, today she no longer answer to my worries, nor pain at heart Her smile endures the passing adversary to whom I failed Her heart thinks of trashing mine to the curb, and I await patiently holding hope's hand It is believed that in a thousand years one would come to love like Romeo Yet in my scene I have already erased my name from the script She dwells alone, and only with memories of mine that slowly fade into nothing I was then and I stand no where in her now I weep like a child, my heart fills with regret It is so hard to say just forget, for the pain takes life again and again Fresh tears fall and I taste my gloomy heart I fall to darkness when I see no light to guide my direction I am lost I lost my world My alley leaves and I stand still, awaiting my term and judgement to see my eyes Farewell to my dreams and hopes to be, for today I die I desire only to be made anew, troubled times twist and lurk in my day No longer will I dream, please I beg for a day just one more day in Alley's arms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/1/2009 10:33:00 PM
Very powerful! I could feel your pain as I read it. It's great to see a man writing about his feelings this way.
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:36:00 PM
poetic is a redundant phase but I think artistic and fluent might suffice, it flow like a song beauty and power and strong honest emotion. goodwrite--tara
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Date: 9/23/2009 9:05:00 PM
Very poignant of a write. Your sorrow is felt very deeply through the lines. It takes time to heal from lost love, but don't let it get your heart. Your prayers will be answered. God will heal your heart and fill it with His love, because you have faith. Thanks for sharing a painful write. Caroline.
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Date: 9/23/2009 7:40:00 PM
heart-wrenching, Eduardo, very well written prayer!... jim
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