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My Heart I Give To God

My heart I give to God. For He is the reason I am here. So, I will place my trust in him, I will walk the path God wants me to. I will love my Father, and all of our neighbors too. Hoping to experience his warm embrace. Until then, I'll keep my faith and march on. For I know, he will be there in the end. welcoming me back home, With opened arms. My heart, I give to God. 5/11/2017

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White Wolf

Date: 7/3/2017 3:23:00 AM

Wow, that looks awesome! Form and content! Well done, Jeremy

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/4/2017 3:16:00 PM

Thanks, White Wolf :) I really enjoyed creating this one!!

Ironic Zink

Date: 5/28/2017 3:22:00 AM

We can all agree that you knocked this poem out of the park! The dopest heart sharped poem I've ever seen!

James Inman

Date: 5/24/2017 5:00:00 PM

Jeremy, you have created a beautifully shaped poem. I enjoy the complexity of creating such works and yours is outstanding.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/15/2017 8:32:00 PM

Congratulations Jeremy :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2017 12:35:00 PM

- Jeremy, congratulations on your great win poems ... love the shape - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White

Date: 5/13/2017 9:05:00 AM

OOOOwwwww JEREMY, you won!!!!! I am so proud, hah! It is wonderful :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/13/2017 8:48:00 AM

Beautifully penned Jeremy...Congrats on a great win

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/14/2017 6:56:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph!!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/14/2017 3:39:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph!!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 5/12/2017 6:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jeremy. Beautiful shape and message.

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/12/2017 6:34:00 PM

Wow, there are a lot of glitches on her.Thank you Agnes, this is my first FIRST place ever in poetry!!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/12/2017 6:31:00 PM

Thank you, so much Cyndi for looking. And also for reading it!!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/12/2017 7:59:00 AM

This is so lovely. If you attend church, why not print it out or send it digitally to your church? I'm sure your pastor/minister or the priest would love to read this... and maybe even share it with the congregation. It's worth sharing OFF soup, too. Cheers

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/12/2017 10:45:00 AM

Thank you, so much Cyndi for looking. And also for reading it!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2017 7:27:00 PM

what a most beautiful shape AND message poem, Jeremy!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/11/2017 7:40:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!!

Darren White

Date: 5/11/2017 2:34:00 AM

I love it how you formed your poem here. You can use the form CONCRETE for it, if you like. It is a beautiful poem, Jeremy :) I especially like how you started and ended with the same sentence.

Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 9:06:00 AM

I like it how you like me four times ;)

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/11/2017 3:08:00 AM

Thank you so much Darren, you have been a true inspiration.

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/11/2017 3:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Darren, you have been a true inspiration.

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/11/2017 3:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Darren, you have been a true inspiration.

Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/11/2017 2:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Darren, you have been a true inspiration.