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My Heart I Give To God

My heart        I      give to God.
                     For He is              the reason                I am here.
          So, I will place                      my                         trust in him,
          I will walk the                      path                         God wants me to.
I will love my Father,                    and all                        of our neighbors too.
Hoping to experience                                                    his warm embrace.
     Until then, I'll keep                                               my faith and march on.
         For I know, he will                                         be there in the end.
                  welcoming me                                  back home,
                                    With       opened     arms.
                                               My heart, I
                                                  give to
                                                    God.

                                                5/11/2017

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White Wolf Date: 7/3/2017 3:23:00 AM Wow, that looks awesome! Form and content! Well done, Jeremy Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 7/4/2017 3:16:00 PM Thanks, White Wolf :) I really enjoyed creating this one!!

Ironic Zink Date: 5/28/2017 3:22:00 AM We can all agree that you knocked this poem out of the park! The dopest heart sharped poem I've ever seen! Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 5/24/2017 5:00:00 PM Jeremy, you have created a beautifully shaped poem. I enjoy the complexity of creating such works and yours is outstanding. Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 5/15/2017 8:32:00 PM Congratulations Jeremy :) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/13/2017 12:35:00 PM - Jeremy, congratulations on your great win poems ... love the shape - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 5/13/2017 9:05:00 AM OOOOwwwww JEREMY, you won!!!!! I am so proud, hah! It is wonderful :) Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/13/2017 8:48:00 AM Beautifully penned Jeremy...Congrats on a great win Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 5/14/2017 6:56:00 PM Thank you, Joseph!! Jeremy Smith Date: 5/14/2017 3:39:00 PM Thank you, Joseph!!

Agnes Krampe Date: 5/12/2017 6:14:00 PM Congrats on your win, Jeremy. Beautiful shape and message. Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 5/12/2017 6:34:00 PM Wow, there are a lot of glitches on her.Thank you Agnes, this is my first FIRST place ever in poetry!! Jeremy Smith Date: 5/12/2017 6:31:00 PM Thank you, so much Cyndi for looking. And also for reading it!!

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 5/12/2017 7:59:00 AM This is so lovely. If you attend church, why not print it out or send it digitally to your church? I'm sure your pastor/minister or the priest would love to read this... and maybe even share it with the congregation. It's worth sharing OFF soup, too. Cheers Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 5/12/2017 10:45:00 AM Thank you, so much Cyndi for looking. And also for reading it!!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/11/2017 7:27:00 PM what a most beautiful shape AND message poem, Jeremy! Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 5/11/2017 7:40:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!!

Darren White Date: 5/11/2017 2:34:00 AM I love it how you formed your poem here. You can use the form CONCRETE for it, if you like. It is a beautiful poem, Jeremy :) I especially like how you started and ended with the same sentence. Login to Reply Darren White Date: 5/13/2017 9:06:00 AM I like it how you like me four times ;) Jeremy Smith Date: 5/11/2017 3:08:00 AM Thank you so much Darren, you have been a true inspiration. Jeremy Smith Date: 5/11/2017 3:06:00 AM Thank you so much Darren, you have been a true inspiration. Jeremy Smith Date: 5/11/2017 3:02:00 AM Thank you so much Darren, you have been a true inspiration. Jeremy Smith Date: 5/11/2017 2:37:00 AM Thank you so much Darren, you have been a true inspiration.