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My Heart

My My heart heart Oh I lost a big piece of my heart when you left, up so far away my sweet old cat. Yes, my heart is crushed it has just shattered. It lays at my feet broken in a thousand shards jagged, and, I may never, ever be able to put it back together. There is a great hole where my love for you should be, and I still wake up weeping your name each new day. I can still hear your last sad quiet meow in my arms. How you laid your weary head on my shoulder, while I sang you a sweet goodbye lullaby; that tune will haunt me forevermore. You left this world with a soft sigh, like a whisper- in the new dawn; and I held you crying for hours, 'till you had gone stone cold. I put you in your pink blanket with tears; My heart weeps for a cat dead. ____________________________________ July 2, 2018 Poetry/Shape/My Heart Copyright Protected, ID 18-1037-552-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Get Into Shape sponsor, Maureen McGreavy Tenth Place

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Date: 8/13/2018 1:36:00 PM
You made me cry..... Written with such sadness. Sorry for your loss Dear Heart. Congrats though on this lovely poem x
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Date: 8/13/2018 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well thought-out and created shape and poem. Enjoyed the concept but sad for your loss.
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Date: 8/12/2018 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Constance, certainly pulls at the heart strings, beautifully written and excellent shape. :((
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Date: 8/11/2018 10:28:00 PM
Just lovely! Congrats on your win in the contest! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/11/2018 8:59:00 PM
So sweet. Beautifully crafted, Dear Heart.
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Date: 8/11/2018 8:05:00 PM
WOW! I am so captivated by the beautiful imagery and expressions of your wonderful work! BRAVO and congratulations! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 8/11/2018 6:41:00 PM
Well written verse , Constance, congratulations on your fantastic piece,, Sorry for your loss . Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/11/2018 5:42:00 PM
And now I get to see the picture! Touching piece Constance, your attention to detail in the shape is impeccable. Congratulations on your win! Thank you :) xomo!
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Date: 8/11/2018 4:13:00 PM
Love this, very creative and sad, it made me think of when I lost my 22 yr old cat.
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Date: 7/3/2018 3:24:00 PM
- Beautifully shaped ... feel your sadness, B.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/3/2018 11:54:00 AM
I can see why this kitty captured your heart, creative and beautiful, thanks for sharing BW.
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