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My Headfire

The Headfire spreading wildly through my mind Uncontrollably the words start to flow As visions of ideas are designed My creativity begins to grow There are so many thoughts I can't escape Some magical, a colorful garden Or a lake surrounded by lush landscape The images that won't let my heart harden Others are quite darker and saddening Like the love I have lost throughout my life And my shameful sins which are maddening It is filling my heart with so much strife Whatever theme, my Headfire leads the way Until the day I have nothing to say 6/24/2017

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Date: 7/8/2017 10:06:00 PM
Another win Jeremy!!Woohoo!! What a great piece you have put together fine Sir!! Headfire eh? I like it! Gotta fave this beauty!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/8/2017 10:09:00 PM
Thanks, John that means a lot to me coming from you ;)
Date: 6/28/2017 9:12:00 PM
Jeremy, very well done, I love this, I like the way you write,
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/28/2017 9:20:00 PM
Thank you so much for your nice comment :)
Date: 6/27/2017 6:35:00 AM
You have aptly described the thoughts of the mind. The sometimes battlefield and thoughts divine! Love it, Jeremy!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/27/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Kim for the comment and fave :) I truly appreciate it!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2017 6:36:00 AM
Congrats and I saved as a fave!
Date: 6/24/2017 7:51:00 PM
You are improving with every write, Jeremy! It is so noticeable!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/24/2017 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, White Wolf!! You have been very inspirational throughout my journey thus far :)

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