Jeremy Smith Poet Sonnet

My Headfire

The Headfire spreading wildly through my mind
Uncontrollably the words start to flow 
As visions of ideas are designed
My creativity begins to grow

There are so many thoughts I can't escape
Some magical, a colorful garden 
Or a lake surrounded by lush landscape
The images that won't let my heart harden

Others are quite darker and saddening 
Like the love I have lost throughout my life
And my shameful sins which are maddening  
It is filling my heart with so much strife

Whatever theme, my Headfire leads the way
Until the day I have nothing to say

6/24/2017

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John Hamilton July 8, 2017 at 10:06 PM Another win Jeremy!!Woohoo!! What a great piece you have put together fine Sir!! Headfire eh? I like it! Gotta fave this beauty! Jeremy Smith July 8, 2017 at 10:09 PM Thanks, John that means a lot to me coming from you ;)

Constance La France June 28, 2017 at 9:12 PM Jeremy, very well done, I love this, I like the way you write, Jeremy Smith June 28, 2017 at 9:20 PM Thank you so much for your nice comment :)

Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2017 at 6:35 AM You have aptly described the thoughts of the mind. The sometimes battlefield and thoughts divine! Love it, Jeremy! Jeremy Smith June 27, 2017 at 10:44 AM Thanks Kim for the comment and fave :) I truly appreciate it!! Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2017 at 6:36 AM Congrats and I saved as a fave!

White Wolf June 24, 2017 at 7:51 PM You are improving with every write, Jeremy! It is so noticeable! Jeremy Smith June 24, 2017 at 7:55 PM Thank you, White Wolf!! You have been very inspirational throughout my journey thus far :)