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My Half of the Love

endless kisses from the heart, my mind and souls delight. alone i know the things you bring, that bring my smiles to life. holding you carressing you, our spirits one in flight. the songs you sing giving me soothing vibrations in the night. a look, a smile, a certian style, i crave with all my might. loving you could mean to me. there is no wrong or right. with our words joined together lovers hearts unite. the love you give, a click, comforts me every night. sending messages with my keys hoping to excite. and when the moon touches us with it's grey and blue of night. we will share it's extasay in the middle of the night (a little more than my half of a collaboraation for the contest)

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Date: 3/1/2011 10:59:00 AM
such a delight to read," liked"
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Date: 2/28/2011 4:15:00 PM
Looks good and look forward to reading the other half of the poem. Thank you for your comment on my poem. It was purely fictional . love phyl
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:50:00 PM
Looks like a good half. I am anxious to see the other half.
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Date: 2/24/2011 10:32:00 AM
Very passionate work, John..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:29:00 AM
This is beautiful, John. With whom are you collaborating? I'd like to see what your writing partner posted too. Much love always, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2011 6:14:00 AM
Your half of the love makes up the whole!! lovely poem!!!love, Simone
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Date: 2/21/2011 6:21:00 PM
oooh very lovely...wishing you the best...Shauna Riley
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