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My Great Grandma

My great grandmother is an old lady. I see her as two hundred She has lost a lot of teeth Her hair is thinning Her face looks like a quilt of the tiniest diamonds I cannot stop looking at her chin hairs. I am eight. She is the oldest thing I have ever seen. Older than trees and houses I bet. She bends her finger to me. She wants me over there. She smells like coffee. I am reluctant. “Grandma wants you” my grandma says. I go. Great grandma gets out a large book. She points to a picture. “That little girl is me,” she says. The girl looks about half my age. Now I am convinced this old woman is insane.

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Date: 3/29/2023 5:10:00 PM
touching penny, grandmas are so far from kids, i adore the punchline, thanks for the excellent penning
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/30/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Yann

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