My Grandmothers Soup

Sometimes when
nightfalls of summer 
feel so cold,
and everything seems dark,
I turn to the heat of 
my grandmother’s soup. 
Life can exist 
within bone China 
or simple ceramic textures, 
savoring salt and spices,
but when it becomes
bland, we seek 
sentimental essences 
to ease our yearning. 
When watercolor
sunsets break into 
warm saffron hues,
I remember her soft 
smile that
bestowed hope upon me,
resonating ancient 
flavors seasoned 
from perfectly peppered
zests of her soul. 

Crumbs of 
her cuisine seduce
a dull skyline
into gourmet 
tamarind twilight,
as the warm touch 
of her culinary run 
through the hallways 
of my childhood home, 
like an aromatic 
epitome of hand 
cooked love,
she sprinkles 
ingredients of faith,
marinated in minced
humor, 
with lemongrass 
and lentil lullabies,
in a heart-shaped 
bowl of tom-yum 
testimonies.

And now I sit here 
reliving a distant
delicacy so close
to the taste buds 
of my mind.

I will always crave 
for the first course
of my grandmother’s
Friday feast, 
served in a tray
of fragrant memoirs,
garnished in laughter,
cultivated with delight, 
amidst the wrinkles
that reveal the recipe
to unravel euphoric 
tales of her 
unforgettable kitchen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ricci Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 4:02 AM
Good Morning Ink Empress. Hello. Welcome to poetrysoup. I turned to this entry at random because your title caught my eye. I had the best grandmother in the world. You chose to share your grandmother with the best format of free verse which to me was a wise choice for the format is marvelous for all obvious reasons including flow. Your words are most beautiful as you speak of your grandmother's soup kitchen home and yes love. Thank you for sharing. Take Care (smile)
George Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 8:44 PM
How can one pen such delectable lines that will warm any heart like a bowl of steaming delicious soup on a wintry day! Not only inhaled the spicy aroma of your grandma's soup, but relished every bit of it till the last dregs..... "an aromatic epitome of hand cooked love, she sprinkles ingredients of faith, marinated in minced humor, with lemongrass and lentil lullabies, in a heart-shaped bowl of tom-yum testimonies." So yummy, dear.
Empress Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 2:07 AM
You are so sweet and kind beautiful soul, thank u so much for ur generous support and for feeling my words truly im grateful
Delaney Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 1:57 PM
This is a beautiful heartfelt write on a precious and timeless memory. I can almost taste the lemongrass.Your Grandmother sounds so lovable. SuZ
Empress Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 2:07 AM
Thank u beautiful appreciate u
One Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 2:17 AM
Sounds yummy yummy in my tummy tummy... you are lucky to hve your grandma cook for you in such a loveable way.. bet you miss that soup.
Empress Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Thank you for acknowledging my poem. Grateful for all the support
Poet Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-earned contest win, with this creative poem.
Empress Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 4:03 AM
Thank you so much my poetic friend
Kauffman Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 11:10 AM
Inky, you have woven the artistry of your grandmother's soup into the artistry of your poem! I always look forward to taking in your poetic gifts and the smiles of appreciation for the way you craft your writes! What a gift! Congratulations! Blessings! PS - what was the name of your grandmother's soup?
Empress Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 3:59 AM
Always appreciate ur feedback thank u so much. It was about tom yum soup as u can see tom tum testimony and also ingredients of that. My granny is a gem and a great cook but she lives in another city/island which is why i miss her
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 10:57 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... I wish I remembered my grandmother's soup ... a pleasure to read, Ink :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 4:15 AM
Thank you so much.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 6:34 AM
This is such a lovely piece. I hope she passed on her recipes to you. As long as you have them you can hold a special essence of her.
Empress Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 4:16 AM
Thank u so much richard
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 2:14 PM
Your pen can turn something ordinary like a cup of soup into culinary miracle. And rightly so given the recipe of your beloved grandmother--with a special ingredient--unmatched flavor of love! Splendid as always, Ink.
Empress Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 4:17 AM
You are so kind , and this means alot, coming from you thank you so much:
Lindley Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Ahh my friend, you make her soup seems so very delicious and uplifting too. Indeed, you must have had a grandmother like mine! One that gave love and cooked like an angel. Made me hungry now. A true gem and a new fav for me. God bless you.
Empress Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 4:18 AM
Yes it is and she is a gem really but my granny lives in another city/island so which makes me miss her soup alot . Thank you for always being so supportive
Poet Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Your heartfelt homage to your grandmother, resonating with nostalgic recollections of her lovingly prepared meals, is exquisitely written. Through a masterful blend of diverse flavors and textures, you have crafted a culinary masterpiece that evokes profound emotions and stirs the depths of one's soul. Within the confines of this cherished soup recipe, you have encapsulated the essence of life, imparted invaluable lessons, and revealed timeless truths. The comforting embrace of your grandmother's soup recipe has tenderly enveloped all these aspects, creating a tapestry of warm reminiscences.
May Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 7:36 AM
Beautiful tribute to your grandmother, echoing with memories of "hand cooked love", Well penned
Empress Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 4:19 AM
Thank you so very much
Sharma  Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 6:47 AM
My goodness dear Ink Empress, this made me nostalgic and emotional.. Sigh, I really miss my maternal grandma.. And I am typing this with tears in my eyes.. With all the difference flavors and textures of cuisine, you've carved a delicacy of deep emotions, flowing in such soul stirring sentiments.. The reflection of life, lessons, truths and essence.. All has been enveloped in the warm reveries of your grandmother's soup recipe here.. This is one of the best writes I've read in along while really
Sharma  Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 6:49 AM
Even one of my topmost fave from you.. The descriptions, imageries, wordplay.. Ah, everything looks so alluring and fascinating but is hued with utmost poignant feelings.. Yet sequined with a certain comfort and embrace in her memories.. I can praise this piece all day.. This just is magical! Sending you so much love always
Radice Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 5:11 AM
I love this tureen full of flavour, feeling, spices and memories Ink Empress all beautifully served up in a bowl of perfect free verse. It warms the heart. Cheers - Gary
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