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My Grandmothers Soup

Sometimes when nightfalls of summer feel so cold, and everything seems dark, I turn to the heat of my grandmother’s soup. Life can exist within bone China or simple ceramic textures, savoring salt and spices, but when it becomes bland, we seek sentimental essences to ease our yearning. When watercolor sunsets break into warm saffron hues, I remember her soft smile that bestowed hope upon me, resonating ancient flavors seasoned from perfectly peppered zests of her soul. Crumbs of her cuisine seduce a dull skyline into gourmet tamarind twilight, as the warm touch of her culinary run through the hallways of my childhood home, like an aromatic epitome of hand cooked love, she sprinkles ingredients of faith, marinated in minced humor, with lemongrass and lentil lullabies, in a heart-shaped bowl of tom-yum testimonies. And now I sit here reliving a distant delicacy so close to the taste buds of my mind. I will always crave for the first course of my grandmother’s Friday feast, served in a tray of fragrant memoirs, garnished in laughter, cultivated with delight, amidst the wrinkles that reveal the recipe to unravel euphoric tales of her unforgettable kitchen.

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Date: 10/29/2023 4:02:00 AM
Good Morning Ink Empress. Hello. Welcome to poetrysoup. I turned to this entry at random because your title caught my eye. I had the best grandmother in the world. You chose to share your grandmother with the best format of free verse which to me was a wise choice for the format is marvelous for all obvious reasons including flow. Your words are most beautiful as you speak of your grandmother's soup kitchen home and yes love. Thank you for sharing. Take Care (smile)
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Date: 10/8/2023 2:31:00 PM
Your poem is absolutely delicious and well crafted. I'm impressed with how you weave memories into backdrop of your grandmother's cooking and her kitchen. There are so many lines I love about your poem. They resonate with me and echo my sentiments about my grandmother's cooking and her kitchen. Like you, I sometimes crave fragrant memoirs. I really liked "she sprinkles ingredients of faith marinated in minced humor." Your poetic style & voice are inspirational. You're poetess extraordinair.
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Date: 10/5/2023 8:44:00 PM
How can one pen such delectable lines that will warm any heart like a bowl of steaming delicious soup on a wintry day! Not only inhaled the spicy aroma of your grandma's soup, but relished every bit of it till the last dregs..... "an aromatic epitome of hand cooked love, she sprinkles ingredients of faith, marinated in minced humor, with lemongrass and lentil lullabies, in a heart-shaped bowl of tom-yum testimonies." So yummy, dear.
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/6/2023 2:07:00 AM
You are so sweet and kind beautiful soul, thank u so much for ur generous support and for feeling my words truly im grateful
Date: 9/7/2023 1:57:00 PM
This is a beautiful heartfelt write on a precious and timeless memory. I can almost taste the lemongrass.Your Grandmother sounds so lovable. SuZ
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/6/2023 2:07:00 AM
Thank u beautiful appreciate u
Date: 9/3/2023 2:17:00 AM
Sounds yummy yummy in my tummy tummy... you are lucky to hve your grandma cook for you in such a loveable way.. bet you miss that soup.
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Date: 9/1/2023 2:00:00 PM
Thank you for acknowledging my poem. Grateful for all the support
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Date: 9/1/2023 11:25:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-earned contest win, with this creative poem.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/2/2023 4:03:00 AM
Thank you so much my poetic friend
Date: 9/1/2023 11:10:00 AM
Inky, you have woven the artistry of your grandmother's soup into the artistry of your poem! I always look forward to taking in your poetic gifts and the smiles of appreciation for the way you craft your writes! What a gift! Congratulations! Blessings! PS - what was the name of your grandmother's soup?
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/2/2023 3:59:00 AM
Always appreciate ur feedback thank u so much. It was about tom yum soup as u can see tom tum testimony and also ingredients of that. My granny is a gem and a great cook but she lives in another city/island which is why i miss her
Date: 9/1/2023 10:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... I wish I remembered my grandmother's soup ... a pleasure to read, Ink :) - hugs
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/2/2023 4:15:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 9/1/2023 7:00:00 AM
Such a beautiful memory and of course, a well written poem. I'm afraid my soup memories are all Campbells lol. Still, my grandma made decent fried chicken, so that's something. I love this simpler side of you, though there were plenty of metaphorical references here
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/1/2023 2:01:00 PM
Im shattered and i give up now.. sigh
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/1/2023 11:54:00 AM
What??? What is going on over there? Soupmail me if you want
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Date: 9/1/2023 10:28:00 AM
Oh well it lasted few mins, now both my accounts are suspended smh sigh
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Date: 9/1/2023 9:23:00 AM
Happy for you if it makes you happy
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/1/2023 8:51:00 AM
Kingy guess what i got my account back , old one on instagram, which was unjustly disabled. Im truly so overwhelmed today. Thank u also for ur support here
Date: 9/1/2023 6:34:00 AM
This is such a lovely piece. I hope she passed on her recipes to you. As long as you have them you can hold a special essence of her.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/2/2023 4:16:00 AM
Thank u so much richard
Date: 8/31/2023 2:14:00 PM
Your pen can turn something ordinary like a cup of soup into culinary miracle. And rightly so given the recipe of your beloved grandmother--with a special ingredient--unmatched flavor of love! Splendid as always, Ink.
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Date: 9/2/2023 4:17:00 AM
You are so kind , and this means alot, coming from you thank you so much:
Date: 8/31/2023 2:12:00 PM
I appreciate the story behind your grandmother's soup and can relate to it. I like the phrase "tastebuds of my mind." Truly poetic but accurate. On cool autumn days I yearn for my grandmother and her favorite German creation, Strueselkuchen.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/3/2023 2:28:00 AM
Ah your comments are always thoughtful , i will look up on google for this soup. I must try. I have been to Germany, its a beautiful place
Date: 8/31/2023 11:35:00 AM
Ahh my friend, you make her soup seems so very delicious and uplifting too. Indeed, you must have had a grandmother like mine! One that gave love and cooked like an angel. Made me hungry now. A true gem and a new fav for me. God bless you.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/2/2023 4:18:00 AM
Yes it is and she is a gem really but my granny lives in another city/island so which makes me miss her soup alot . Thank you for always being so supportive
Date: 8/31/2023 8:22:00 AM
Your heartfelt homage to your grandmother, resonating with nostalgic recollections of her lovingly prepared meals, is exquisitely written. Through a masterful blend of diverse flavors and textures, you have crafted a culinary masterpiece that evokes profound emotions and stirs the depths of one's soul. Within the confines of this cherished soup recipe, you have encapsulated the essence of life, imparted invaluable lessons, and revealed timeless truths. The comforting embrace of your grandmother's soup recipe has tenderly enveloped all these aspects, creating a tapestry of warm reminiscences.
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Date: 8/31/2023 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your grandmother, echoing with memories of "hand cooked love", Well penned
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/2/2023 4:19:00 AM
Thank you so very much
Date: 8/31/2023 6:47:00 AM
My goodness dear Ink Empress, this made me nostalgic and emotional.. Sigh, I really miss my maternal grandma.. And I am typing this with tears in my eyes.. With all the difference flavors and textures of cuisine, you've carved a delicacy of deep emotions, flowing in such soul stirring sentiments.. The reflection of life, lessons, truths and essence.. All has been enveloped in the warm reveries of your grandmother's soup recipe here.. This is one of the best writes I've read in along while really
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Date: 8/31/2023 6:49:00 AM
Even one of my topmost fave from you.. The descriptions, imageries, wordplay.. Ah, everything looks so alluring and fascinating but is hued with utmost poignant feelings.. Yet sequined with a certain comfort and embrace in her memories.. I can praise this piece all day.. This just is magical! Sending you so much love always
Date: 8/31/2023 5:11:00 AM
I love this tureen full of flavour, feeling, spices and memories Ink Empress all beautifully served up in a bowl of perfect free verse. It warms the heart. Cheers - Gary
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