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My first car was a Maverick ... like me ! With a fresh paint job, beautiful to see. I passed my driver's test, So full of youthful zest, Then backed into a pole I didn't see. ~~~~~ ~~~~~ see "about this poem" for photo * true story: one hour after passing my driver's test I jumped into the car and bumped into a pole backing out of my parking space, marring the brand new paint job. for Carol Brown's "My First Car" contest Francine Roberts 06/03/2012

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Date: 3/28/2012 8:46:00 PM
Oh my, that's pretty funny. I like this poem very much so. Good job- JH
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:09:00 PM
oh my gosh, how did I ever miss this one? It ROCKS, Francine. Big congrats!!!
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Date: 3/13/2012 4:30:00 PM
stories of the blest, what a pest...the power pole test...
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Date: 3/13/2012 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations Francine, well done xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:47:00 PM
congrats Francine on a grand win for this awesome first car write and entry luv..
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:37:00 PM
That was a misfortunate accident. Congrats your win in Carol's contest. love phyl
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2012 11:08:00 PM
After you backed into the pole, you went forward and ran over a Swede. Good limerick Francine.
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Date: 3/7/2012 5:15:00 PM
a cleverly told story. good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/7/2012 4:04:00 AM
So , you knocked a guy from Warsaw !!! . Well crafted piece , Francine and should do well in the contest ..
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Date: 3/6/2012 11:22:00 PM
Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it, I hope you win the contest.
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