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My Garden Fork

At my age, turning over garden soil with a five-tine fork is arduous work, forcing dry skin to break into beads of sweat, awakening reluctant muscles. With every dig I strike a hidden stone, disturbing its complacency, every fork full of earth exposing squirming worms in broken tunnel-homes, as if my garden fork had become a Day of Reckoning for worms, uncovering hidden lives. The exposure pricked my conscience, and I felt a need to apologize for the unintended intrusion. Resting, I thought: How different in our case, given the way we humans have managed His earth. Will His wrath be tinged with remorse or mercy? Or will millennia of suppressed wrath justify His vengeance?

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Date: 3/22/2023 1:08:00 AM
I read your last reply and realize how time goes on and we are paralyzed, unable to solve the continuing dilemma. Cleverly crafted rhyme! Elizabeth
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Date: 3/21/2023 6:59:00 PM
A very good question, Maurice. Sure makes you stop and think. A pleasure to read.
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 3/21/2023 7:02:00 PM
I wrote this poem some years ago, Dan, and edited it sparingly. If it made you think, I accomplished my purpose. Thank stopping by and leaving a comment. / Maurice

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