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My Friend, My Love

I imagine being there in enchanting places
Conjuring up insights of sensuous images
Driving friendship to threshold of romance
Confessing my love when she isn't around.

When the uplifting sky adorns rosy sunrise
Quickly I abandon the constraints of norms
As soaring vibrancy celebrates the new day
Guiding my hopes to contours of happiness.

A look in her eyes now transforms my heart
Sending intimate hints to commit a trespass
As a glimpse of her smile boldly reaches out
Tearing down the barriers that hold us apart.

I've seen a change in the way she responds
When walk in the park turns to jubilant stars
And touch of her hand claims a flirting glance
Enticing our vibes to command fervor of life.

Yearning for encounter of alluring emotions
Fire of desire intoxicates dreams of the dawn
In passionate kisses forestalled for so long
Reaching finality of love in each other's arms.

January 16, 2019
Placed 2nd: My friend, My Love contest by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 3/17/2019 1:29:00 PM
Hi Vijay, Close proximity with friends can bring forth subdued feelings of love - sometimes it is OK to go forth, sometimes it could break hearts - a soulful poem and one so true, I'm sure a lot of us have experienced a situation like this - a fave for me. very well penned. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/5/2019 3:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Vijay. This is a poem of yours that somehow got past me!
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Date: 1/27/2019 8:27:00 AM
The line between friendship and love can be very slim sometimes, and it takes some courage to take the step of no return. As usual, you excel in these vivid and romantic poems, Vijay. Congrats on your win. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Paul. Regards.
Date: 1/26/2019 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 1/26/2019 12:24:00 AM
This is so romantic set with nature's beauty Vijay. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 1/25/2019 7:54:00 PM
You write romance so beautifully. Your thoughts whisper softly along the page. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Brandy.
Date: 1/18/2019 8:21:00 AM
Hi Vijay, You have penned a good entry for the contest. I really enjoy reading poems about love and romance. I found this write to be captivating, alluring and romantic. Great job. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2019 11:04:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 1/18/2019 8:12:00 AM
Enchanting language of romance that captivates the heart dear, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2019 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios.
Date: 1/17/2019 4:43:00 PM
Your poetry is alluring Vij, sending you a flower of friendship and a candy smile
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2019 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Pixie.
Date: 1/17/2019 1:39:00 PM
You always "abandon the constraints of norms".. as you hold your pen and craft your captivating poetry! With each poem I read, there's a new flair.. a different magic.. a higher level of beauty! An exquisite poem enchanting the soul and enlivening the heart.. A great pleasure to read your beauty dear Vijay.. A win and a FAV. for me.. My deepest regards and Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 3:58:00 PM
Always a delight to read your cheerful and supportive comments. Many thanks for the FAVE. Regards, Besma.
Date: 1/17/2019 1:37:00 PM
"A smile removes the barriers"...Wonderful write Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 3:57:00 PM
Appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks Joseph.
Date: 1/17/2019 11:32:00 AM
Ahhh, romance. Wishing you the best in the contest Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thank you Charlie--appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 1/17/2019 9:04:00 AM
Well done, Vijay, a very charming write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thanks you Lawrence..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 1/17/2019 8:27:00 AM
This is a perfect expression of the theme Vijay, done in your very romantic technique! Well done and best for a win !!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 1:19:00 PM
Appreciate the kind feedback Mike..many thanks.
Date: 1/17/2019 8:19:00 AM
What a lovely, romantic piece, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 1:18:00 PM
Appreciate the visit and comments. Thank you Janice.
Date: 1/17/2019 12:07:00 AM
Wow! Such a transition from friendship to love. I really wallowed in your well chosen words. Such imagery should place you highest in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 7:47:00 AM
Good to have you back Victor. Appreciate your visit and feedback..many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 1/16/2019 10:16:00 PM
And this is how it should always be. Friendship blooming into love. A heart knows when the time is right, for such emotions to take flight. Friends become more!! Because of understanding, compassion and trust. This is so beautiful and romantic. "Confessing my love when she isn't around" Exactly!! :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 7:46:00 AM
You are always so pleasant..a joy to read your feedback..many thanks Brandy.
Date: 1/16/2019 5:18:00 PM
Wow. Believe it or not, when I saw the title and know how you write so well, I said to myself...I know this is going to be good . It is excellent! A fave! Have a nice evening :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 7:44:00 AM
You are so kind my friend. Appreciate your support, as always..many many thanks.
Date: 1/16/2019 4:42:00 PM
From friendship to love written so well Vijay. Good luck. Tom.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 7:43:00 AM
Many thanks Tom..appreciate the visit and kind remarks.
Date: 1/16/2019 3:41:00 PM
This is a winner for me, Vijay, love the sentiment...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Harry..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 1/16/2019 2:33:00 PM
vijay, your language rouses my spirit... wonderfully handled, this friendship, this love!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you my friend--appreciate the kind feedback.