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My Friend, My Love

I imagine being there in enchanting places Conjuring up insights of sensuous images Driving friendship to threshold of romance Confessing my love when she isn't around. When the uplifting sky adorns rosy sunrise Quickly I abandon the constraints of norms As soaring vibrancy celebrates the new day Guiding my hopes to contours of happiness. A look in her eyes now transforms my heart Sending intimate hints to commit a trespass As a glimpse of her smile boldly reaches out Tearing down the barriers that hold us apart. I've seen a change in the way she responds When walk in the park turns to jubilant stars And touch of her hand claims a flirting glance Enticing our vibes to command fervor of life. Yearning for encounter of alluring emotions Fire of desire intoxicates dreams of the dawn In passionate kisses forestalled for so long Reaching finality of love in each other's arms. January 16, 2019 Placed 2nd: My friend, My Love contest by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver HM: Strand #700 contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 2/9/2023 8:17:00 AM

A love, slowly evolving, growing steadily and reaching fruition is beautifully delineated ! Another wonderful song of passion from the great Poet of Love! Beautiful and intense....

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/17/2019 1:29:00 PM

Hi Vijay, Close proximity with friends can bring forth subdued feelings of love - sometimes it is OK to go forth, sometimes it could break hearts - a soulful poem and one so true, I'm sure a lot of us have experienced a situation like this - a fave for me. very well penned. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2019 3:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Vijay. This is a poem of yours that somehow got past me!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/27/2019 8:27:00 AM

The line between friendship and love can be very slim sometimes, and it takes some courage to take the step of no return. As usual, you excel in these vivid and romantic poems, Vijay. Congrats on your win. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Paul. Regards.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/26/2019 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2019 12:24:00 AM

This is so romantic set with nature's beauty Vijay. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Connie.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/25/2019 7:54:00 PM

You write romance so beautifully. Your thoughts whisper softly along the page. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/28/2019 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Brandy.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/18/2019 8:21:00 AM

Hi Vijay, You have penned a good entry for the contest. I really enjoy reading poems about love and romance. I found this write to be captivating, alluring and romantic. Great job. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2019 11:04:00 AM

Thank you Alexis.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/18/2019 8:12:00 AM

Enchanting language of romance that captivates the heart dear, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2019 11:03:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/17/2019 4:43:00 PM

Your poetry is alluring Vij, sending you a flower of friendship and a candy smile

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/18/2019 11:03:00 AM

Thank you Pixie.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/17/2019 1:39:00 PM

You always "abandon the constraints of norms".. as you hold your pen and craft your captivating poetry! With each poem I read, there's a new flair.. a different magic.. a higher level of beauty! An exquisite poem enchanting the soul and enlivening the heart.. A great pleasure to read your beauty dear Vijay.. A win and a FAV. for me.. My deepest regards and Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 3:58:00 PM

Always a delight to read your cheerful and supportive comments. Many thanks for the FAVE. Regards, Besma.

Joseph May

Date: 1/17/2019 1:37:00 PM

"A smile removes the barriers"...Wonderful write Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 3:57:00 PM

Appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks Joseph.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/17/2019 11:32:00 AM

Ahhh, romance. Wishing you the best in the contest Vijay...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 1:20:00 PM

Thank you Charlie--appreciate your visit and comments.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 1/17/2019 9:04:00 AM

Well done, Vijay, a very charming write.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 1:20:00 PM

Thanks you Lawrence..appreciate your visit and comments.

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/17/2019 8:27:00 AM

This is a perfect expression of the theme Vijay, done in your very romantic technique! Well done and best for a win !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 1:19:00 PM

Appreciate the kind feedback Mike..many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/17/2019 8:19:00 AM

What a lovely, romantic piece, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 1:18:00 PM

Appreciate the visit and comments. Thank you Janice.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/16/2019 10:16:00 PM

And this is how it should always be. Friendship blooming into love. A heart knows when the time is right, for such emotions to take flight. Friends become more!! Because of understanding, compassion and trust. This is so beautiful and romantic. "Confessing my love when she isn't around" Exactly!! :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 7:46:00 AM

You are always so pleasant..a joy to read your feedback..many thanks Brandy.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/16/2019 5:18:00 PM

Wow. Believe it or not, when I saw the title and know how you write so well, I said to myself...I know this is going to be good . It is excellent! A fave! Have a nice evening :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/17/2019 7:44:00 AM

You are so kind my friend. Appreciate your support, as always..many many thanks.