Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

My Friend, My Love

I imagine being there in enchanting places
Conjuring up insights of sensuous images
Driving friendship to threshold of romance
Confessing my love when she isn't around.

When the uplifting sky adorns rosy sunrise
Quickly I abandon the constraints of norms
As soaring vibrancy celebrates the new day
Guiding my hopes to contours of happiness.

A look in her eyes now transforms my heart
Sending intimate hints to commit a trespass
As a glimpse of her smile boldly reaches out
Tearing down the barriers that hold us apart.

I've seen a change in the way she responds
When walk in the park turns to jubilant stars
And touch of her hand claims a flirting glance
Enticing our vibes to command fervor of life.

Yearning for encounter of alluring emotions
Fire of desire intoxicates dreams of the dawn
In passionate kisses forestalled for so long
Reaching finality of love in each other's arms.

January 16, 2019
Placed 2nd: My friend, My Love contest by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver
HM: Strand #700 contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George February 9, 2023 at 8:17 AM A love, slowly evolving, growing steadily and reaching fruition is beautifully delineated ! Another wonderful song of passion from the great Poet of Love! Beautiful and intense....

Jennifer Proxenos March 17, 2019 at 1:29 PM Hi Vijay, Close proximity with friends can bring forth subdued feelings of love - sometimes it is OK to go forth, sometimes it could break hearts - a soulful poem and one so true, I'm sure a lot of us have experienced a situation like this - a fave for me. very well penned. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2019 at 3:36 PM Congrats on your win, Vijay. This is a poem of yours that somehow got past me!

Paul Callus January 27, 2019 at 8:27 AM The line between friendship and love can be very slim sometimes, and it takes some courage to take the step of no return. As usual, you excel in these vivid and romantic poems, Vijay. Congrats on your win. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 10:05 AM Thank you Paul. Regards.

Heidi Sands January 26, 2019 at 12:21 PM Congratulations for your win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 10:05 AM Thank you Heidi.

Connie Marcum Wong January 26, 2019 at 12:24 AM This is so romantic set with nature's beauty Vijay. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 10:04 AM Thank you Connie.

Brandy Nicole January 25, 2019 at 7:54 PM You write romance so beautifully. Your thoughts whisper softly along the page. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit January 28, 2019 at 10:04 AM Thank you Brandy.

Alexis Y. January 18, 2019 at 8:21 AM Hi Vijay, You have penned a good entry for the contest. I really enjoy reading poems about love and romance. I found this write to be captivating, alluring and romantic. Great job. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit January 18, 2019 at 11:04 AM Thank you Alexis.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 18, 2019 at 8:12 AM Enchanting language of romance that captivates the heart dear, Vijay! Vijay Pandit January 18, 2019 at 11:03 AM Thank you Demetrios.

Mystic Rose Rose January 17, 2019 at 4:43 PM Your poetry is alluring Vij, sending you a flower of friendship and a candy smile Vijay Pandit January 18, 2019 at 11:03 AM Thank you Pixie.

Besma Riabi Dziri January 17, 2019 at 1:39 PM You always "abandon the constraints of norms".. as you hold your pen and craft your captivating poetry! With each poem I read, there's a new flair.. a different magic.. a higher level of beauty! An exquisite poem enchanting the soul and enlivening the heart.. A great pleasure to read your beauty dear Vijay.. A win and a FAV. for me.. My deepest regards and Blessings. Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 3:58 PM Always a delight to read your cheerful and supportive comments. Many thanks for the FAVE. Regards, Besma.

Joseph May January 17, 2019 at 1:37 PM "A smile removes the barriers"...Wonderful write Vijay.. Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 3:57 PM Appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks Joseph.

Charlie Smith January 17, 2019 at 11:32 AM Ahhh, romance. Wishing you the best in the contest Vijay... Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 1:20 PM Thank you Charlie--appreciate your visit and comments.

Lawrence Sharp January 17, 2019 at 9:04 AM Well done, Vijay, a very charming write. Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 1:20 PM Thanks you Lawrence..appreciate your visit and comments.

Mike Gentile January 17, 2019 at 8:27 AM This is a perfect expression of the theme Vijay, done in your very romantic technique! Well done and best for a win !!! Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 1:19 PM Appreciate the kind feedback Mike..many thanks.

Janice Canerdy January 17, 2019 at 8:19 AM What a lovely, romantic piece, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 1:18 PM Appreciate the visit and comments. Thank you Janice.

Brandy Nicole January 16, 2019 at 10:16 PM And this is how it should always be. Friendship blooming into love. A heart knows when the time is right, for such emotions to take flight. Friends become more!! Because of understanding, compassion and trust. This is so beautiful and romantic. "Confessing my love when she isn't around" Exactly!! :) Brandy Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 7:46 AM You are always so pleasant..a joy to read your feedback..many thanks Brandy.

Heidi Sands January 16, 2019 at 5:18 PM Wow. Believe it or not, when I saw the title and know how you write so well, I said to myself...I know this is going to be good . It is excellent! A fave! Have a nice evening :) Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 7:44 AM You are so kind my friend. Appreciate your support, as always..many many thanks.

Tom Cunningham January 16, 2019 at 4:42 PM From friendship to love written so well Vijay. Good luck. Tom. Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 7:43 AM Many thanks Tom..appreciate the visit and kind remarks.

Harry Horsman January 16, 2019 at 3:41 PM This is a winner for me, Vijay, love the sentiment... Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 7:43 AM Thank you Harry..appreciate your visit and comments.

Nette Onclaud January 16, 2019 at 2:33 PM vijay, your language rouses my spirit... wonderfully handled, this friendship, this love!...huggs Vijay Pandit January 17, 2019 at 7:42 AM Thank you my friend--appreciate the kind feedback.