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My Friend, My Love

I watch you sleep and wonder where our love will go when twilight moon has touched the hands of God and aging sun has crossed the bridge of night Daylight spoons of memories will lay upon my breath fuller still then our own sun did, long and long ago my friend, my love, I wrap my arms around your waist of warm suppressing yawns, my thoughts like flowers bloom inside this aging room, what mesmerizes me the most is the fact that we contain the total years of servant love with roses fresh and stems as green as yesterday, my friend, my love, Don't wake soulmate, before the schooner dawn has had a chance to listen to its heart own feel right here with spread of sleep still in your hair I dare give prayer to our union bless and morn's confess , my friend, my love, I watch you sleep and wonder what I'll do when you have gone to angel's keep perhaps, I can come too , perhaps ? BY: Mystic Rose 01/08/2019

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Date: 1/26/2019 12:28:00 AM
A very touching love poem Vie. This is written beautifully and expresses a deep love that endures. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/8/2019 9:22:00 PM
This is just so beautifully poetic, Pixie. I was captured by your breathtaking emotional imagery and expression. Exquisite poetry.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/8/2019 5:27:00 PM
Beautifully written. I could feel a sweet morning , love and pleasant thoughts ! I enjoyed this very much. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/8/2019 1:38:00 PM
Wonderful and emotive, excellent entry for the contest!
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Date: 1/8/2019 11:26:00 AM
"Daylight spoons of memories will lay upon my breath fuller still then our own sun did, long and long ago" - gorgeously done, Pixie Dust!
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Date: 1/8/2019 6:55:00 AM
This is so so beautiful..though a free verse, it reads like a romantic love song. Excellent poem.. sure to win at the TOP.
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